Alternative Medicine | Writing for Academic IELTS PDF Download

This essay on the subject of Alternative Advertisement. In these types of essays, you are presented with one statement where you can either agree, disagree or partly agree with the statement and write an essay on the basis of that.

Q. Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Ways to Answer:

• When you are asked whether you agree (or disagree), you can look at both sides of the argument if you want.  This shows that you have good academic skills as you are able to see both sides of the issue. 
• It can also sometimes be a good idea to look at both sides of the argument because it may be easier for you to brainstorm ideas. 
• If you just look at one side, you may run out of ideas.

In the answer below, the writer disagrees overall with the opinion presented - that alternative medicine is ineffective and possibly dangerous. However, in the first body paragraph the writer discusses what those who agree with this opinion think. If you are going to put in an opinion that disagrees with your own, it is common to put this argument first. This makes your argument stronger as you can then refute it in the following paragraph. In the second body paragraph, the writer gives the reasons why he/she disagrees. 

In other words: 

• Body 1 = the disadvantages of alternative medicine
• Body 2 = the advantages of alternative medicine

It is then a good balanced conclusion as the writer states that they are best used together.

Note: The following is just a sample answer discussing the answer in just one way. You may choose to write a different answer according to your own opinion.

Sample Answer

Alternative medicine is not new. It is accepted that it pre-dates conventional medicine and it is still used by many people all over the world. I am unconvinced that it is dangerous, and feel that both alternative and conventional medicine can be useful. I shall discuss my opinions in the paragraphs below.

There are several reasons why the conventional medical community is often dismissive of alternatives.  Firstly, there has been little scientific research into such medicine, so there is a scarcity of evidence to support the claims of their supporters. Furthermore, people often try such treatment because of recommendations from friends, and therefore come to the therapist with a very positive attitude, which may be part of the reason for the cure. Moreover, these therapies are usually only useful for long-term, chronic conditions. Acute medical problems, such as accidental injury, often require more conventional methods.

On the other hand, there remain strong arguments for the use of alternatives.  Despite the lack of scientific proof, there is a lot of anecdotal evidence to suggest that these therapies work. In addition, far from being dangerous, they often have few or no side effects, so the worst outcome would be no change. One of the strongest arguments for the effectiveness of alternative therapies in the West is that, whilst conventional medicine is available without charge, many people are prepared to pay considerable sums for alternatives. If they were totally unhelpful, it would be surprising if this continued.

I strongly believe that conventional medicine and alternative therapies can and should coexist. They have different strengths, and can both be used effectively to target particular medical problems. The best situation would be for alternative therapies to be used to support and complement conventional medicine.