Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
The following paragraphs may or may not be in the most logical order. You may be asked questions about the logical order of the paragraphs, as well as where to place sentences logically within any given paragraph.
Passage
Michigan’s Mesmeric Stone
Some residents of Michigan would probably be (1) surprised and shocked to learn that, during the Devonian Age, 350 million years ago, this northern state was located near the earth’s equator. At that time, Michigan was (2) hidden underneath by a warm body of water. It was this marine environment that eventually produced Michigan’s unique rock formation known as the Petoskey stone.
The light brown Petoskey stone is easily distinguished from other stones (3) having its pattern of numerous and contiguous six-sided cells. These cells were once the living coral that was present during the Devonian Age, which (4) slow became petrified into rock that was then gradually carried north by the slow movement of glaciers. Petoskey stones can vary in appearance, largely due to the content of each coral cell. Most Petoskey stones contain high levels of calcite, (5) but some also contain quartz, pyrite, silica, and other minerals. Because of this variety in makeup, polishing a Petoskey stone can either be a fairly simple task or one that (6) highly requires a high level of skill and patience.
1. Some rock collectors might be fortunate to find a Petoskey stone that has been naturally polished by (7) wind; sand; and water.
2. In many cases, though, the stones are not exposed to the elements, so some hard labor might be necessary to produce a smooth, shiny surface that displays the stones’ unique pattern.
3. (8) Despite this, the calcite contained in Petoskey stone is highly conducive to (9) hand polishing; it is soft enough to give way to sandpaper, yet strong enough to accept the polishing compound that is usually applied once all the scratch marks have been carefully sanded away.
4. It is important to take time to remove all of the scratches, (10) then they will be present in the finished stone along with the coral fossils. (11)
For the serious rock enthusiast, investing in an electric rock tumbler is a good way to simplify the process of rock-polishing. Simply place the collected rocks into the paint-can sized canister, add polishing compound, and push the button. This begins a long rotation process whereby the (12) stones are abraded until they have a smooth, glossy finish.
One advantage of using a rock tumbler instead of hand polishing the stones (13) are that the tumbler can do the work while you scout for more stones to put in it!
Petoskey stones are often difficult to find, depending on the season of the year. Generally, early spring will bring in a new crop of stones after the ice has melted and the stones have been pushed to the shorelines of the northern Great Lakes. (14) A good rain will highlight the Petoskey stone’s coral pattern, making it easier to spot in the sand. Of course, you can always find Petoskey stones in tourist shops throughout the northern part of the state, but it is much more fun and satisfying to locate one yourself as you walk along the beautiful beaches of Michigan.
Q. (1)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
The following paragraphs may or may not be in the most logical order. You may be asked questions about the logical order of the paragraphs, as well as where to place sentences logically within any given paragraph.
Passage
Michigan’s Mesmeric Stone
Some residents of Michigan would probably be (1) surprised and shocked to learn that, during the Devonian Age, 350 million years ago, this northern state was located near the earth’s equator. At that time, Michigan was (2) hidden underneath by a warm body of water. It was this marine environment that eventually produced Michigan’s unique rock formation known as the Petoskey stone.
The light brown Petoskey stone is easily distinguished from other stones (3) having its pattern of numerous and contiguous six-sided cells. These cells were once the living coral that was present during the Devonian Age, which (4) slow became petrified into rock that was then gradually carried north by the slow movement of glaciers. Petoskey stones can vary in appearance, largely due to the content of each coral cell. Most Petoskey stones contain high levels of calcite, (5) but some also contain quartz, pyrite, silica, and other minerals. Because of this variety in makeup, polishing a Petoskey stone can either be a fairly simple task or one that (6) highly requires a high level of skill and patience.
1. Some rock collectors might be fortunate to find a Petoskey stone that has been naturally polished by (7) wind; sand; and water.
2. In many cases, though, the stones are not exposed to the elements, so some hard labor might be necessary to produce a smooth, shiny surface that displays the stones’ unique pattern.
3. (8) Despite this, the calcite contained in Petoskey stone is highly conducive to (9) hand polishing; it is soft enough to give way to sandpaper, yet strong enough to accept the polishing compound that is usually applied once all the scratch marks have been carefully sanded away.
4. It is important to take time to remove all of the scratches, (10) then they will be present in the finished stone along with the coral fossils. (11)
For the serious rock enthusiast, investing in an electric rock tumbler is a good way to simplify the process of rock-polishing. Simply place the collected rocks into the paint-can sized canister, add polishing compound, and push the button. This begins a long rotation process whereby the (12) stones are abraded until they have a smooth, glossy finish.
One advantage of using a rock tumbler instead of hand polishing the stones (13) are that the tumbler can do the work while you scout for more stones to put in it!
Petoskey stones are often difficult to find, depending on the season of the year. Generally, early spring will bring in a new crop of stones after the ice has melted and the stones have been pushed to the shorelines of the northern Great Lakes. (14) A good rain will highlight the Petoskey stone’s coral pattern, making it easier to spot in the sand. Of course, you can always find Petoskey stones in tourist shops throughout the northern part of the state, but it is much more fun and satisfying to locate one yourself as you walk along the beautiful beaches of Michigan.
Q. (2)
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Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
The following paragraphs may or may not be in the most logical order. You may be asked questions about the logical order of the paragraphs, as well as where to place sentences logically within any given paragraph.
Passage
Michigan’s Mesmeric Stone
Some residents of Michigan would probably be (1) surprised and shocked to learn that, during the Devonian Age, 350 million years ago, this northern state was located near the earth’s equator. At that time, Michigan was (2) hidden underneath by a warm body of water. It was this marine environment that eventually produced Michigan’s unique rock formation known as the Petoskey stone.
The light brown Petoskey stone is easily distinguished from other stones (3) having its pattern of numerous and contiguous six-sided cells. These cells were once the living coral that was present during the Devonian Age, which (4) slow became petrified into rock that was then gradually carried north by the slow movement of glaciers. Petoskey stones can vary in appearance, largely due to the content of each coral cell. Most Petoskey stones contain high levels of calcite, (5) but some also contain quartz, pyrite, silica, and other minerals. Because of this variety in makeup, polishing a Petoskey stone can either be a fairly simple task or one that (6) highly requires a high level of skill and patience.
1. Some rock collectors might be fortunate to find a Petoskey stone that has been naturally polished by (7) wind; sand; and water.
2. In many cases, though, the stones are not exposed to the elements, so some hard labor might be necessary to produce a smooth, shiny surface that displays the stones’ unique pattern.
3. (8) Despite this, the calcite contained in Petoskey stone is highly conducive to (9) hand polishing; it is soft enough to give way to sandpaper, yet strong enough to accept the polishing compound that is usually applied once all the scratch marks have been carefully sanded away.
4. It is important to take time to remove all of the scratches, (10) then they will be present in the finished stone along with the coral fossils. (11)
For the serious rock enthusiast, investing in an electric rock tumbler is a good way to simplify the process of rock-polishing. Simply place the collected rocks into the paint-can sized canister, add polishing compound, and push the button. This begins a long rotation process whereby the (12) stones are abraded until they have a smooth, glossy finish.
One advantage of using a rock tumbler instead of hand polishing the stones (13) are that the tumbler can do the work while you scout for more stones to put in it!
Petoskey stones are often difficult to find, depending on the season of the year. Generally, early spring will bring in a new crop of stones after the ice has melted and the stones have been pushed to the shorelines of the northern Great Lakes. (14) A good rain will highlight the Petoskey stone’s coral pattern, making it easier to spot in the sand. Of course, you can always find Petoskey stones in tourist shops throughout the northern part of the state, but it is much more fun and satisfying to locate one yourself as you walk along the beautiful beaches of Michigan.
Q. (3)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
The following paragraphs may or may not be in the most logical order. You may be asked questions about the logical order of the paragraphs, as well as where to place sentences logically within any given paragraph.
Passage
Michigan’s Mesmeric Stone
Some residents of Michigan would probably be (1) surprised and shocked to learn that, during the Devonian Age, 350 million years ago, this northern state was located near the earth’s equator. At that time, Michigan was (2) hidden underneath by a warm body of water. It was this marine environment that eventually produced Michigan’s unique rock formation known as the Petoskey stone.
The light brown Petoskey stone is easily distinguished from other stones (3) having its pattern of numerous and contiguous six-sided cells. These cells were once the living coral that was present during the Devonian Age, which (4) slow became petrified into rock that was then gradually carried north by the slow movement of glaciers. Petoskey stones can vary in appearance, largely due to the content of each coral cell. Most Petoskey stones contain high levels of calcite, (5) but some also contain quartz, pyrite, silica, and other minerals. Because of this variety in makeup, polishing a Petoskey stone can either be a fairly simple task or one that (6) highly requires a high level of skill and patience.
1. Some rock collectors might be fortunate to find a Petoskey stone that has been naturally polished by (7) wind; sand; and water.
2. In many cases, though, the stones are not exposed to the elements, so some hard labor might be necessary to produce a smooth, shiny surface that displays the stones’ unique pattern.
3. (8) Despite this, the calcite contained in Petoskey stone is highly conducive to (9) hand polishing; it is soft enough to give way to sandpaper, yet strong enough to accept the polishing compound that is usually applied once all the scratch marks have been carefully sanded away.
4. It is important to take time to remove all of the scratches, (10) then they will be present in the finished stone along with the coral fossils. (11)
For the serious rock enthusiast, investing in an electric rock tumbler is a good way to simplify the process of rock-polishing. Simply place the collected rocks into the paint-can sized canister, add polishing compound, and push the button. This begins a long rotation process whereby the (12) stones are abraded until they have a smooth, glossy finish.
One advantage of using a rock tumbler instead of hand polishing the stones (13) are that the tumbler can do the work while you scout for more stones to put in it!
Petoskey stones are often difficult to find, depending on the season of the year. Generally, early spring will bring in a new crop of stones after the ice has melted and the stones have been pushed to the shorelines of the northern Great Lakes. (14) A good rain will highlight the Petoskey stone’s coral pattern, making it easier to spot in the sand. Of course, you can always find Petoskey stones in tourist shops throughout the northern part of the state, but it is much more fun and satisfying to locate one yourself as you walk along the beautiful beaches of Michigan.
Q. (4)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
The following paragraphs may or may not be in the most logical order. You may be asked questions about the logical order of the paragraphs, as well as where to place sentences logically within any given paragraph.
Passage
Michigan’s Mesmeric Stone
Some residents of Michigan would probably be (1) surprised and shocked to learn that, during the Devonian Age, 350 million years ago, this northern state was located near the earth’s equator. At that time, Michigan was (2) hidden underneath by a warm body of water. It was this marine environment that eventually produced Michigan’s unique rock formation known as the Petoskey stone.
The light brown Petoskey stone is easily distinguished from other stones (3) having its pattern of numerous and contiguous six-sided cells. These cells were once the living coral that was present during the Devonian Age, which (4) slow became petrified into rock that was then gradually carried north by the slow movement of glaciers. Petoskey stones can vary in appearance, largely due to the content of each coral cell. Most Petoskey stones contain high levels of calcite, (5) but some also contain quartz, pyrite, silica, and other minerals. Because of this variety in makeup, polishing a Petoskey stone can either be a fairly simple task or one that (6) highly requires a high level of skill and patience.
1. Some rock collectors might be fortunate to find a Petoskey stone that has been naturally polished by (7) wind; sand; and water.
2. In many cases, though, the stones are not exposed to the elements, so some hard labor might be necessary to produce a smooth, shiny surface that displays the stones’ unique pattern.
3. (8) Despite this, the calcite contained in Petoskey stone is highly conducive to (9) hand polishing; it is soft enough to give way to sandpaper, yet strong enough to accept the polishing compound that is usually applied once all the scratch marks have been carefully sanded away.
4. It is important to take time to remove all of the scratches, (10) then they will be present in the finished stone along with the coral fossils. (11)
For the serious rock enthusiast, investing in an electric rock tumbler is a good way to simplify the process of rock-polishing. Simply place the collected rocks into the paint-can sized canister, add polishing compound, and push the button. This begins a long rotation process whereby the (12) stones are abraded until they have a smooth, glossy finish.
One advantage of using a rock tumbler instead of hand polishing the stones (13) are that the tumbler can do the work while you scout for more stones to put in it!
Petoskey stones are often difficult to find, depending on the season of the year. Generally, early spring will bring in a new crop of stones after the ice has melted and the stones have been pushed to the shorelines of the northern Great Lakes. (14) A good rain will highlight the Petoskey stone’s coral pattern, making it easier to spot in the sand. Of course, you can always find Petoskey stones in tourist shops throughout the northern part of the state, but it is much more fun and satisfying to locate one yourself as you walk along the beautiful beaches of Michigan.
Q. (5) Which choice would best help to establish that Petoskey stones can vary from one another?
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
The following paragraphs may or may not be in the most logical order. You may be asked questions about the logical order of the paragraphs, as well as where to place sentences logically within any given paragraph.
Passage
Michigan’s Mesmeric Stone
Some residents of Michigan would probably be (1) surprised and shocked to learn that, during the Devonian Age, 350 million years ago, this northern state was located near the earth’s equator. At that time, Michigan was (2) hidden underneath by a warm body of water. It was this marine environment that eventually produced Michigan’s unique rock formation known as the Petoskey stone.
The light brown Petoskey stone is easily distinguished from other stones (3) having its pattern of numerous and contiguous six-sided cells. These cells were once the living coral that was present during the Devonian Age, which (4) slow became petrified into rock that was then gradually carried north by the slow movement of glaciers. Petoskey stones can vary in appearance, largely due to the content of each coral cell. Most Petoskey stones contain high levels of calcite, (5) but some also contain quartz, pyrite, silica, and other minerals. Because of this variety in makeup, polishing a Petoskey stone can either be a fairly simple task or one that (6) highly requires a high level of skill and patience.
1. Some rock collectors might be fortunate to find a Petoskey stone that has been naturally polished by (7) wind; sand; and water.
2. In many cases, though, the stones are not exposed to the elements, so some hard labor might be necessary to produce a smooth, shiny surface that displays the stones’ unique pattern.
3. (8) Despite this, the calcite contained in Petoskey stone is highly conducive to (9) hand polishing; it is soft enough to give way to sandpaper, yet strong enough to accept the polishing compound that is usually applied once all the scratch marks have been carefully sanded away.
4. It is important to take time to remove all of the scratches, (10) then they will be present in the finished stone along with the coral fossils. (11)
For the serious rock enthusiast, investing in an electric rock tumbler is a good way to simplify the process of rock-polishing. Simply place the collected rocks into the paint-can sized canister, add polishing compound, and push the button. This begins a long rotation process whereby the (12) stones are abraded until they have a smooth, glossy finish.
One advantage of using a rock tumbler instead of hand polishing the stones (13) are that the tumbler can do the work while you scout for more stones to put in it!
Petoskey stones are often difficult to find, depending on the season of the year. Generally, early spring will bring in a new crop of stones after the ice has melted and the stones have been pushed to the shorelines of the northern Great Lakes. (14) A good rain will highlight the Petoskey stone’s coral pattern, making it easier to spot in the sand. Of course, you can always find Petoskey stones in tourist shops throughout the northern part of the state, but it is much more fun and satisfying to locate one yourself as you walk along the beautiful beaches of Michigan.
Q. (6)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
The following paragraphs may or may not be in the most logical order. You may be asked questions about the logical order of the paragraphs, as well as where to place sentences logically within any given paragraph.
Passage
Michigan’s Mesmeric Stone
Some residents of Michigan would probably be (1) surprised and shocked to learn that, during the Devonian Age, 350 million years ago, this northern state was located near the earth’s equator. At that time, Michigan was (2) hidden underneath by a warm body of water. It was this marine environment that eventually produced Michigan’s unique rock formation known as the Petoskey stone.
The light brown Petoskey stone is easily distinguished from other stones (3) having its pattern of numerous and contiguous six-sided cells. These cells were once the living coral that was present during the Devonian Age, which (4) slow became petrified into rock that was then gradually carried north by the slow movement of glaciers. Petoskey stones can vary in appearance, largely due to the content of each coral cell. Most Petoskey stones contain high levels of calcite, (5) but some also contain quartz, pyrite, silica, and other minerals. Because of this variety in makeup, polishing a Petoskey stone can either be a fairly simple task or one that (6) highly requires a high level of skill and patience.
1. Some rock collectors might be fortunate to find a Petoskey stone that has been naturally polished by (7) wind; sand; and water.
2. In many cases, though, the stones are not exposed to the elements, so some hard labor might be necessary to produce a smooth, shiny surface that displays the stones’ unique pattern.
3. (8) Despite this, the calcite contained in Petoskey stone is highly conducive to (9) hand polishing; it is soft enough to give way to sandpaper, yet strong enough to accept the polishing compound that is usually applied once all the scratch marks have been carefully sanded away.
4. It is important to take time to remove all of the scratches, (10) then they will be present in the finished stone along with the coral fossils. (11)
For the serious rock enthusiast, investing in an electric rock tumbler is a good way to simplify the process of rock-polishing. Simply place the collected rocks into the paint-can sized canister, add polishing compound, and push the button. This begins a long rotation process whereby the (12) stones are abraded until they have a smooth, glossy finish.
One advantage of using a rock tumbler instead of hand polishing the stones (13) are that the tumbler can do the work while you scout for more stones to put in it!
Petoskey stones are often difficult to find, depending on the season of the year. Generally, early spring will bring in a new crop of stones after the ice has melted and the stones have been pushed to the shorelines of the northern Great Lakes. (14) A good rain will highlight the Petoskey stone’s coral pattern, making it easier to spot in the sand. Of course, you can always find Petoskey stones in tourist shops throughout the northern part of the state, but it is much more fun and satisfying to locate one yourself as you walk along the beautiful beaches of Michigan.
Q. (7)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
The following paragraphs may or may not be in the most logical order. You may be asked questions about the logical order of the paragraphs, as well as where to place sentences logically within any given paragraph.
Passage
Michigan’s Mesmeric Stone
Some residents of Michigan would probably be (1) surprised and shocked to learn that, during the Devonian Age, 350 million years ago, this northern state was located near the earth’s equator. At that time, Michigan was (2) hidden underneath by a warm body of water. It was this marine environment that eventually produced Michigan’s unique rock formation known as the Petoskey stone.
The light brown Petoskey stone is easily distinguished from other stones (3) having its pattern of numerous and contiguous six-sided cells. These cells were once the living coral that was present during the Devonian Age, which (4) slow became petrified into rock that was then gradually carried north by the slow movement of glaciers. Petoskey stones can vary in appearance, largely due to the content of each coral cell. Most Petoskey stones contain high levels of calcite, (5) but some also contain quartz, pyrite, silica, and other minerals. Because of this variety in makeup, polishing a Petoskey stone can either be a fairly simple task or one that (6) highly requires a high level of skill and patience.
1. Some rock collectors might be fortunate to find a Petoskey stone that has been naturally polished by (7) wind; sand; and water.
2. In many cases, though, the stones are not exposed to the elements, so some hard labor might be necessary to produce a smooth, shiny surface that displays the stones’ unique pattern.
3. (8) Despite this, the calcite contained in Petoskey stone is highly conducive to (9) hand polishing; it is soft enough to give way to sandpaper, yet strong enough to accept the polishing compound that is usually applied once all the scratch marks have been carefully sanded away.
4. It is important to take time to remove all of the scratches, (10) then they will be present in the finished stone along with the coral fossils. (11)
For the serious rock enthusiast, investing in an electric rock tumbler is a good way to simplify the process of rock-polishing. Simply place the collected rocks into the paint-can sized canister, add polishing compound, and push the button. This begins a long rotation process whereby the (12) stones are abraded until they have a smooth, glossy finish.
One advantage of using a rock tumbler instead of hand polishing the stones (13) are that the tumbler can do the work while you scout for more stones to put in it!
Petoskey stones are often difficult to find, depending on the season of the year. Generally, early spring will bring in a new crop of stones after the ice has melted and the stones have been pushed to the shorelines of the northern Great Lakes. (14) A good rain will highlight the Petoskey stone’s coral pattern, making it easier to spot in the sand. Of course, you can always find Petoskey stones in tourist shops throughout the northern part of the state, but it is much more fun and satisfying to locate one yourself as you walk along the beautiful beaches of Michigan.
Q. (8)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
The following paragraphs may or may not be in the most logical order. You may be asked questions about the logical order of the paragraphs, as well as where to place sentences logically within any given paragraph.
Passage
Michigan’s Mesmeric Stone
Some residents of Michigan would probably be (1) surprised and shocked to learn that, during the Devonian Age, 350 million years ago, this northern state was located near the earth’s equator. At that time, Michigan was (2) hidden underneath by a warm body of water. It was this marine environment that eventually produced Michigan’s unique rock formation known as the Petoskey stone.
The light brown Petoskey stone is easily distinguished from other stones (3) having its pattern of numerous and contiguous six-sided cells. These cells were once the living coral that was present during the Devonian Age, which (4) slow became petrified into rock that was then gradually carried north by the slow movement of glaciers. Petoskey stones can vary in appearance, largely due to the content of each coral cell. Most Petoskey stones contain high levels of calcite, (5) but some also contain quartz, pyrite, silica, and other minerals. Because of this variety in makeup, polishing a Petoskey stone can either be a fairly simple task or one that (6) highly requires a high level of skill and patience.
1. Some rock collectors might be fortunate to find a Petoskey stone that has been naturally polished by (7) wind; sand; and water.
2. In many cases, though, the stones are not exposed to the elements, so some hard labor might be necessary to produce a smooth, shiny surface that displays the stones’ unique pattern.
3. (8) Despite this, the calcite contained in Petoskey stone is highly conducive to (9) hand polishing; it is soft enough to give way to sandpaper, yet strong enough to accept the polishing compound that is usually applied once all the scratch marks have been carefully sanded away.
4. It is important to take time to remove all of the scratches, (10) then they will be present in the finished stone along with the coral fossils. (11)
For the serious rock enthusiast, investing in an electric rock tumbler is a good way to simplify the process of rock-polishing. Simply place the collected rocks into the paint-can sized canister, add polishing compound, and push the button. This begins a long rotation process whereby the (12) stones are abraded until they have a smooth, glossy finish.
One advantage of using a rock tumbler instead of hand polishing the stones (13) are that the tumbler can do the work while you scout for more stones to put in it!
Petoskey stones are often difficult to find, depending on the season of the year. Generally, early spring will bring in a new crop of stones after the ice has melted and the stones have been pushed to the shorelines of the northern Great Lakes. (14) A good rain will highlight the Petoskey stone’s coral pattern, making it easier to spot in the sand. Of course, you can always find Petoskey stones in tourist shops throughout the northern part of the state, but it is much more fun and satisfying to locate one yourself as you walk along the beautiful beaches of Michigan.
Q. (9)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
The following paragraphs may or may not be in the most logical order. You may be asked questions about the logical order of the paragraphs, as well as where to place sentences logically within any given paragraph.
Passage
Michigan’s Mesmeric Stone
Some residents of Michigan would probably be (1) surprised and shocked to learn that, during the Devonian Age, 350 million years ago, this northern state was located near the earth’s equator. At that time, Michigan was (2) hidden underneath by a warm body of water. It was this marine environment that eventually produced Michigan’s unique rock formation known as the Petoskey stone.
The light brown Petoskey stone is easily distinguished from other stones (3) having its pattern of numerous and contiguous six-sided cells. These cells were once the living coral that was present during the Devonian Age, which (4) slow became petrified into rock that was then gradually carried north by the slow movement of glaciers. Petoskey stones can vary in appearance, largely due to the content of each coral cell. Most Petoskey stones contain high levels of calcite, (5) but some also contain quartz, pyrite, silica, and other minerals. Because of this variety in makeup, polishing a Petoskey stone can either be a fairly simple task or one that (6) highly requires a high level of skill and patience.
1. Some rock collectors might be fortunate to find a Petoskey stone that has been naturally polished by (7) wind; sand; and water.
2. In many cases, though, the stones are not exposed to the elements, so some hard labor might be necessary to produce a smooth, shiny surface that displays the stones’ unique pattern.
3. (8) Despite this, the calcite contained in Petoskey stone is highly conducive to (9) hand polishing; it is soft enough to give way to sandpaper, yet strong enough to accept the polishing compound that is usually applied once all the scratch marks have been carefully sanded away.
4. It is important to take time to remove all of the scratches, (10) then they will be present in the finished stone along with the coral fossils. (11)
For the serious rock enthusiast, investing in an electric rock tumbler is a good way to simplify the process of rock-polishing. Simply place the collected rocks into the paint-can sized canister, add polishing compound, and push the button. This begins a long rotation process whereby the (12) stones are abraded until they have a smooth, glossy finish.
One advantage of using a rock tumbler instead of hand polishing the stones (13) are that the tumbler can do the work while you scout for more stones to put in it!
Petoskey stones are often difficult to find, depending on the season of the year. Generally, early spring will bring in a new crop of stones after the ice has melted and the stones have been pushed to the shorelines of the northern Great Lakes. (14) A good rain will highlight the Petoskey stone’s coral pattern, making it easier to spot in the sand. Of course, you can always find Petoskey stones in tourist shops throughout the northern part of the state, but it is much more fun and satisfying to locate one yourself as you walk along the beautiful beaches of Michigan.
Q. (10)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
The following paragraphs may or may not be in the most logical order. You may be asked questions about the logical order of the paragraphs, as well as where to place sentences logically within any given paragraph.
Passage
Michigan’s Mesmeric Stone
Some residents of Michigan would probably be (1) surprised and shocked to learn that, during the Devonian Age, 350 million years ago, this northern state was located near the earth’s equator. At that time, Michigan was (2) hidden underneath by a warm body of water. It was this marine environment that eventually produced Michigan’s unique rock formation known as the Petoskey stone.
The light brown Petoskey stone is easily distinguished from other stones (3) having its pattern of numerous and contiguous six-sided cells. These cells were once the living coral that was present during the Devonian Age, which (4) slow became petrified into rock that was then gradually carried north by the slow movement of glaciers. Petoskey stones can vary in appearance, largely due to the content of each coral cell. Most Petoskey stones contain high levels of calcite, (5) but some also contain quartz, pyrite, silica, and other minerals. Because of this variety in makeup, polishing a Petoskey stone can either be a fairly simple task or one that (6) highly requires a high level of skill and patience.
1. Some rock collectors might be fortunate to find a Petoskey stone that has been naturally polished by (7) wind; sand; and water.
2. In many cases, though, the stones are not exposed to the elements, so some hard labor might be necessary to produce a smooth, shiny surface that displays the stones’ unique pattern.
3. (8) Despite this, the calcite contained in Petoskey stone is highly conducive to (9) hand polishing; it is soft enough to give way to sandpaper, yet strong enough to accept the polishing compound that is usually applied once all the scratch marks have been carefully sanded away.
4. It is important to take time to remove all of the scratches, (10) then they will be present in the finished stone along with the coral fossils. (11)
For the serious rock enthusiast, investing in an electric rock tumbler is a good way to simplify the process of rock-polishing. Simply place the collected rocks into the paint-can sized canister, add polishing compound, and push the button. This begins a long rotation process whereby the (12) stones are abraded until they have a smooth, glossy finish.
One advantage of using a rock tumbler instead of hand polishing the stones (13) are that the tumbler can do the work while you scout for more stones to put in it!
Petoskey stones are often difficult to find, depending on the season of the year. Generally, early spring will bring in a new crop of stones after the ice has melted and the stones have been pushed to the shorelines of the northern Great Lakes. (14) A good rain will highlight the Petoskey stone’s coral pattern, making it easier to spot in the sand. Of course, you can always find Petoskey stones in tourist shops throughout the northern part of the state, but it is much more fun and satisfying to locate one yourself as you walk along the beautiful beaches of Michigan.
Q. (11) For the sake of logic and coherence, Sentence 2 should be placed:
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
The following paragraphs may or may not be in the most logical order. You may be asked questions about the logical order of the paragraphs, as well as where to place sentences logically within any given paragraph.
Passage
Michigan’s Mesmeric Stone
Some residents of Michigan would probably be (1) surprised and shocked to learn that, during the Devonian Age, 350 million years ago, this northern state was located near the earth’s equator. At that time, Michigan was (2) hidden underneath by a warm body of water. It was this marine environment that eventually produced Michigan’s unique rock formation known as the Petoskey stone.
The light brown Petoskey stone is easily distinguished from other stones (3) having its pattern of numerous and contiguous six-sided cells. These cells were once the living coral that was present during the Devonian Age, which (4) slow became petrified into rock that was then gradually carried north by the slow movement of glaciers. Petoskey stones can vary in appearance, largely due to the content of each coral cell. Most Petoskey stones contain high levels of calcite, (5) but some also contain quartz, pyrite, silica, and other minerals. Because of this variety in makeup, polishing a Petoskey stone can either be a fairly simple task or one that (6) highly requires a high level of skill and patience.
1. Some rock collectors might be fortunate to find a Petoskey stone that has been naturally polished by (7) wind; sand; and water.
2. In many cases, though, the stones are not exposed to the elements, so some hard labor might be necessary to produce a smooth, shiny surface that displays the stones’ unique pattern.
3. (8) Despite this, the calcite contained in Petoskey stone is highly conducive to (9) hand polishing; it is soft enough to give way to sandpaper, yet strong enough to accept the polishing compound that is usually applied once all the scratch marks have been carefully sanded away.
4. It is important to take time to remove all of the scratches, (10) then they will be present in the finished stone along with the coral fossils. (11)
For the serious rock enthusiast, investing in an electric rock tumbler is a good way to simplify the process of rock-polishing. Simply place the collected rocks into the paint-can sized canister, add polishing compound, and push the button. This begins a long rotation process whereby the (12) stones are abraded until they have a smooth, glossy finish.
One advantage of using a rock tumbler instead of hand polishing the stones (13) are that the tumbler can do the work while you scout for more stones to put in it!
Petoskey stones are often difficult to find, depending on the season of the year. Generally, early spring will bring in a new crop of stones after the ice has melted and the stones have been pushed to the shorelines of the northern Great Lakes. (14) A good rain will highlight the Petoskey stone’s coral pattern, making it easier to spot in the sand. Of course, you can always find Petoskey stones in tourist shops throughout the northern part of the state, but it is much more fun and satisfying to locate one yourself as you walk along the beautiful beaches of Michigan.
Q. (12)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
The following paragraphs may or may not be in the most logical order. You may be asked questions about the logical order of the paragraphs, as well as where to place sentences logically within any given paragraph.
Passage
Michigan’s Mesmeric Stone
Some residents of Michigan would probably be (1) surprised and shocked to learn that, during the Devonian Age, 350 million years ago, this northern state was located near the earth’s equator. At that time, Michigan was (2) hidden underneath by a warm body of water. It was this marine environment that eventually produced Michigan’s unique rock formation known as the Petoskey stone.
The light brown Petoskey stone is easily distinguished from other stones (3) having its pattern of numerous and contiguous six-sided cells. These cells were once the living coral that was present during the Devonian Age, which (4) slow became petrified into rock that was then gradually carried north by the slow movement of glaciers. Petoskey stones can vary in appearance, largely due to the content of each coral cell. Most Petoskey stones contain high levels of calcite, (5) but some also contain quartz, pyrite, silica, and other minerals. Because of this variety in makeup, polishing a Petoskey stone can either be a fairly simple task or one that (6) highly requires a high level of skill and patience.
1. Some rock collectors might be fortunate to find a Petoskey stone that has been naturally polished by (7) wind; sand; and water.
2. In many cases, though, the stones are not exposed to the elements, so some hard labor might be necessary to produce a smooth, shiny surface that displays the stones’ unique pattern.
3. (8) Despite this, the calcite contained in Petoskey stone is highly conducive to (9) hand polishing; it is soft enough to give way to sandpaper, yet strong enough to accept the polishing compound that is usually applied once all the scratch marks have been carefully sanded away.
4. It is important to take time to remove all of the scratches, (10) then they will be present in the finished stone along with the coral fossils. (11)
For the serious rock enthusiast, investing in an electric rock tumbler is a good way to simplify the process of rock-polishing. Simply place the collected rocks into the paint-can sized canister, add polishing compound, and push the button. This begins a long rotation process whereby the (12) stones are abraded until they have a smooth, glossy finish.
One advantage of using a rock tumbler instead of hand polishing the stones (13) are that the tumbler can do the work while you scout for more stones to put in it!
Petoskey stones are often difficult to find, depending on the season of the year. Generally, early spring will bring in a new crop of stones after the ice has melted and the stones have been pushed to the shorelines of the northern Great Lakes. (14) A good rain will highlight the Petoskey stone’s coral pattern, making it easier to spot in the sand. Of course, you can always find Petoskey stones in tourist shops throughout the northern part of the state, but it is much more fun and satisfying to locate one yourself as you walk along the beautiful beaches of Michigan.
Q. (13)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
The following paragraphs may or may not be in the most logical order. You may be asked questions about the logical order of the paragraphs, as well as where to place sentences logically within any given paragraph.
Passage
Michigan’s Mesmeric Stone
Some residents of Michigan would probably be (1) surprised and shocked to learn that, during the Devonian Age, 350 million years ago, this northern state was located near the earth’s equator. At that time, Michigan was (2) hidden underneath by a warm body of water. It was this marine environment that eventually produced Michigan’s unique rock formation known as the Petoskey stone.
The light brown Petoskey stone is easily distinguished from other stones (3) having its pattern of numerous and contiguous six-sided cells. These cells were once the living coral that was present during the Devonian Age, which (4) slow became petrified into rock that was then gradually carried north by the slow movement of glaciers. Petoskey stones can vary in appearance, largely due to the content of each coral cell. Most Petoskey stones contain high levels of calcite, (5) but some also contain quartz, pyrite, silica, and other minerals. Because of this variety in makeup, polishing a Petoskey stone can either be a fairly simple task or one that (6) highly requires a high level of skill and patience.
1. Some rock collectors might be fortunate to find a Petoskey stone that has been naturally polished by (7) wind; sand; and water.
2. In many cases, though, the stones are not exposed to the elements, so some hard labor might be necessary to produce a smooth, shiny surface that displays the stones’ unique pattern.
3. (8) Despite this, the calcite contained in Petoskey stone is highly conducive to (9) hand polishing; it is soft enough to give way to sandpaper, yet strong enough to accept the polishing compound that is usually applied once all the scratch marks have been carefully sanded away.
4. It is important to take time to remove all of the scratches, (10) then they will be present in the finished stone along with the coral fossils. (11)
For the serious rock enthusiast, investing in an electric rock tumbler is a good way to simplify the process of rock-polishing. Simply place the collected rocks into the paint-can sized canister, add polishing compound, and push the button. This begins a long rotation process whereby the (12) stones are abraded until they have a smooth, glossy finish.
One advantage of using a rock tumbler instead of hand polishing the stones (13) are that the tumbler can do the work while you scout for more stones to put in it!
Petoskey stones are often difficult to find, depending on the season of the year. Generally, early spring will bring in a new crop of stones after the ice has melted and the stones have been pushed to the shorelines of the northern Great Lakes. (14) A good rain will highlight the Petoskey stone’s coral pattern, making it easier to spot in the sand. Of course, you can always find Petoskey stones in tourist shops throughout the northern part of the state, but it is much more fun and satisfying to locate one yourself as you walk along the beautiful beaches of Michigan.
Q. (14) The writer is considering deleting the preceding sentence. If the sentence were deleted, the essay would primarily lose:
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
The following paragraphs may or may not be in the most logical order. You may be asked questions about the logical order of the paragraphs, as well as where to place sentences logically within any given paragraph.
Passage
Michigan’s Mesmeric Stone
Some residents of Michigan would probably be (1) surprised and shocked to learn that, during the Devonian Age, 350 million years ago, this northern state was located near the earth’s equator. At that time, Michigan was (2) hidden underneath by a warm body of water. It was this marine environment that eventually produced Michigan’s unique rock formation known as the Petoskey stone.
The light brown Petoskey stone is easily distinguished from other stones (3) having its pattern of numerous and contiguous six-sided cells. These cells were once the living coral that was present during the Devonian Age, which (4) slow became petrified into rock that was then gradually carried north by the slow movement of glaciers. Petoskey stones can vary in appearance, largely due to the content of each coral cell. Most Petoskey stones contain high levels of calcite, (5) but some also contain quartz, pyrite, silica, and other minerals. Because of this variety in makeup, polishing a Petoskey stone can either be a fairly simple task or one that (6) highly requires a high level of skill and patience.
1. Some rock collectors might be fortunate to find a Petoskey stone that has been naturally polished by (7) wind; sand; and water.
2. In many cases, though, the stones are not exposed to the elements, so some hard labor might be necessary to produce a smooth, shiny surface that displays the stones’ unique pattern.
3. (8) Despite this, the calcite contained in Petoskey stone is highly conducive to (9) hand polishing; it is soft enough to give way to sandpaper, yet strong enough to accept the polishing compound that is usually applied once all the scratch marks have been carefully sanded away.
4. It is important to take time to remove all of the scratches, (10) then they will be present in the finished stone along with the coral fossils. (11)
For the serious rock enthusiast, investing in an electric rock tumbler is a good way to simplify the process of rock-polishing. Simply place the collected rocks into the paint-can sized canister, add polishing compound, and push the button. This begins a long rotation process whereby the (12) stones are abraded until they have a smooth, glossy finish.
One advantage of using a rock tumbler instead of hand polishing the stones (13) are that the tumbler can do the work while you scout for more stones to put in it!
Petoskey stones are often difficult to find, depending on the season of the year. Generally, early spring will bring in a new crop of stones after the ice has melted and the stones have been pushed to the shorelines of the northern Great Lakes. (14) A good rain will highlight the Petoskey stone’s coral pattern, making it easier to spot in the sand. Of course, you can always find Petoskey stones in tourist shops throughout the northern part of the state, but it is much more fun and satisfying to locate one yourself as you walk along the beautiful beaches of Michigan.
Q. Question 15 asks about the preceding passage as a whole.
Suppose the writer had chosen to write an essay about living near the Great Lakes. Would this essay fulfill the writer’s goal?
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
Passage
Summer Creatures
The day was hot and sultry, but the cool of the evening approaches as the sun hides itself behind the horizon. Each
of us has pulled a lawn chair (1) onto the expansive wooden deck and (2) have settled in for the show. No one says a word.
A slight rustling in the thicket of maidenhair ferns off in the distance (3) can resonate; something is either bedding down or emerging for an evening hunt. A similar sound is barely audible just in front of (4) us, and we remain silent and attentive.
Suddenly, loud clucking penetrates the silence, (5) followed by more feverish clucking and chirping, some of it loud and commanding, some more soothing and calming. These are the sounds of wild turkey hens coming in to roost, (6) sounding off on safety issues and weather predictions. They cluck and rustle as they roam through the woods, final destination unknown. Here and there, a chickadee, finch, or red-headed woodpecker flies overhead toward a cozy nest. (7) The sky darkens and the last diurnal winged creature takes to its bed, the evening air begins to welcome its nocturnal flyers, namely fruit bats and night owls. The frenetic bats dart back and forth, high and low, as (8) they began filling their bellies with mosquitoes and other insects. Occasionally an owl will let out its soft “hoo-hoo.” This single call is enough to please the small crowd on the deck.
We begin to hear more rustling that seems much louder than before. As the evening light darkens, the field creatures become braver and bolder, their vision becoming more acute as ours fades with the disappearing light.
It is almost completely dark now, aside from the massive blanket of stars that lingers over our heads. (9) It is dizzying to look up and focus on individual stars, and equally disabling to scan the entire sky and take it in all at once. We still say nothing, except for an occasional whisper of “Did you hear that?” or “Wow.” The reverence is clear, the quiet awe palpable.
1. (10) Suddenly, we hear a single coyote howl way off in the distance, low and slightly tentative, followed shortly by another coyote baying, this time louder and more insistent.
2. We had been told that coyotes live here, but now we knew for sure.
3. The darkness falls all around us and the baying and howling grow louder.
4. Are the coyotes coming closer, or does sound become clearer as the night enfolds us?
5. It is difficult to know for (11) sure: but each subsequent “oowww-ooooh” brings us closer to moving inside the warm cabin. (12) We are (13) calm; but ready to give the night back to its rightful owners. Our skin (14) has cooled from the day’s heat and we have had our bedtime story. Just as we sense that the time has come to slip inside, the unmistakable flash of a streaking meteor (15) is catching our eyes and we jerk our heads upwards, just in time to see the shooting star fade into the blackness. It is time to say goodnight.
Q. (1)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
Passage
Summer Creatures
The day was hot and sultry, but the cool of the evening approaches as the sun hides itself behind the horizon. Each
of us has pulled a lawn chair (1) onto the expansive wooden deck and (2) have settled in for the show. No one says a word.
A slight rustling in the thicket of maidenhair ferns off in the distance (3) can resonate; something is either bedding down or emerging for an evening hunt. A similar sound is barely audible just in front of (4) us, and we remain silent and attentive.
Suddenly, loud clucking penetrates the silence, (5) followed by more feverish clucking and chirping, some of it loud and commanding, some more soothing and calming. These are the sounds of wild turkey hens coming in to roost, (6) sounding off on safety issues and weather predictions. They cluck and rustle as they roam through the woods, final destination unknown. Here and there, a chickadee, finch, or red-headed woodpecker flies overhead toward a cozy nest. (7) The sky darkens and the last diurnal winged creature takes to its bed, the evening air begins to welcome its nocturnal flyers, namely fruit bats and night owls. The frenetic bats dart back and forth, high and low, as (8) they began filling their bellies with mosquitoes and other insects. Occasionally an owl will let out its soft “hoo-hoo.” This single call is enough to please the small crowd on the deck.
We begin to hear more rustling that seems much louder than before. As the evening light darkens, the field creatures become braver and bolder, their vision becoming more acute as ours fades with the disappearing light.
It is almost completely dark now, aside from the massive blanket of stars that lingers over our heads. (9) It is dizzying to look up and focus on individual stars, and equally disabling to scan the entire sky and take it in all at once. We still say nothing, except for an occasional whisper of “Did you hear that?” or “Wow.” The reverence is clear, the quiet awe palpable.
1. (10) Suddenly, we hear a single coyote howl way off in the distance, low and slightly tentative, followed shortly by another coyote baying, this time louder and more insistent.
2. We had been told that coyotes live here, but now we knew for sure.
3. The darkness falls all around us and the baying and howling grow louder.
4. Are the coyotes coming closer, or does sound become clearer as the night enfolds us?
5. It is difficult to know for (11) sure: but each subsequent “oowww-ooooh” brings us closer to moving inside the warm cabin. (12) We are (13) calm; but ready to give the night back to its rightful owners. Our skin (14) has cooled from the day’s heat and we have had our bedtime story. Just as we sense that the time has come to slip inside, the unmistakable flash of a streaking meteor (15) is catching our eyes and we jerk our heads upwards, just in time to see the shooting star fade into the blackness. It is time to say goodnight.
Q. (2)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
Passage
Summer Creatures
The day was hot and sultry, but the cool of the evening approaches as the sun hides itself behind the horizon. Each
of us has pulled a lawn chair (1) onto the expansive wooden deck and (2) have settled in for the show. No one says a word.
A slight rustling in the thicket of maidenhair ferns off in the distance (3) can resonate; something is either bedding down or emerging for an evening hunt. A similar sound is barely audible just in front of (4) us, and we remain silent and attentive.
Suddenly, loud clucking penetrates the silence, (5) followed by more feverish clucking and chirping, some of it loud and commanding, some more soothing and calming. These are the sounds of wild turkey hens coming in to roost, (6) sounding off on safety issues and weather predictions. They cluck and rustle as they roam through the woods, final destination unknown. Here and there, a chickadee, finch, or red-headed woodpecker flies overhead toward a cozy nest. (7) The sky darkens and the last diurnal winged creature takes to its bed, the evening air begins to welcome its nocturnal flyers, namely fruit bats and night owls. The frenetic bats dart back and forth, high and low, as (8) they began filling their bellies with mosquitoes and other insects. Occasionally an owl will let out its soft “hoo-hoo.” This single call is enough to please the small crowd on the deck.
We begin to hear more rustling that seems much louder than before. As the evening light darkens, the field creatures become braver and bolder, their vision becoming more acute as ours fades with the disappearing light.
It is almost completely dark now, aside from the massive blanket of stars that lingers over our heads. (9) It is dizzying to look up and focus on individual stars, and equally disabling to scan the entire sky and take it in all at once. We still say nothing, except for an occasional whisper of “Did you hear that?” or “Wow.” The reverence is clear, the quiet awe palpable.
1. (10) Suddenly, we hear a single coyote howl way off in the distance, low and slightly tentative, followed shortly by another coyote baying, this time louder and more insistent.
2. We had been told that coyotes live here, but now we knew for sure.
3. The darkness falls all around us and the baying and howling grow louder.
4. Are the coyotes coming closer, or does sound become clearer as the night enfolds us?
5. It is difficult to know for (11) sure: but each subsequent “oowww-ooooh” brings us closer to moving inside the warm cabin. (12) We are (13) calm; but ready to give the night back to its rightful owners. Our skin (14) has cooled from the day’s heat and we have had our bedtime story. Just as we sense that the time has come to slip inside, the unmistakable flash of a streaking meteor (15) is catching our eyes and we jerk our heads upwards, just in time to see the shooting star fade into the blackness. It is time to say goodnight.
Q. (3)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
Passage
Summer Creatures
The day was hot and sultry, but the cool of the evening approaches as the sun hides itself behind the horizon. Each
of us has pulled a lawn chair (1) onto the expansive wooden deck and (2) have settled in for the show. No one says a word.
A slight rustling in the thicket of maidenhair ferns off in the distance (3) can resonate; something is either bedding down or emerging for an evening hunt. A similar sound is barely audible just in front of (4) us, and we remain silent and attentive.
Suddenly, loud clucking penetrates the silence, (5) followed by more feverish clucking and chirping, some of it loud and commanding, some more soothing and calming. These are the sounds of wild turkey hens coming in to roost, (6) sounding off on safety issues and weather predictions. They cluck and rustle as they roam through the woods, final destination unknown. Here and there, a chickadee, finch, or red-headed woodpecker flies overhead toward a cozy nest. (7) The sky darkens and the last diurnal winged creature takes to its bed, the evening air begins to welcome its nocturnal flyers, namely fruit bats and night owls. The frenetic bats dart back and forth, high and low, as (8) they began filling their bellies with mosquitoes and other insects. Occasionally an owl will let out its soft “hoo-hoo.” This single call is enough to please the small crowd on the deck.
We begin to hear more rustling that seems much louder than before. As the evening light darkens, the field creatures become braver and bolder, their vision becoming more acute as ours fades with the disappearing light.
It is almost completely dark now, aside from the massive blanket of stars that lingers over our heads. (9) It is dizzying to look up and focus on individual stars, and equally disabling to scan the entire sky and take it in all at once. We still say nothing, except for an occasional whisper of “Did you hear that?” or “Wow.” The reverence is clear, the quiet awe palpable.
1. (10) Suddenly, we hear a single coyote howl way off in the distance, low and slightly tentative, followed shortly by another coyote baying, this time louder and more insistent.
2. We had been told that coyotes live here, but now we knew for sure.
3. The darkness falls all around us and the baying and howling grow louder.
4. Are the coyotes coming closer, or does sound become clearer as the night enfolds us?
5. It is difficult to know for (11) sure: but each subsequent “oowww-ooooh” brings us closer to moving inside the warm cabin. (12) We are (13) calm; but ready to give the night back to its rightful owners. Our skin (14) has cooled from the day’s heat and we have had our bedtime story. Just as we sense that the time has come to slip inside, the unmistakable flash of a streaking meteor (15) is catching our eyes and we jerk our heads upwards, just in time to see the shooting star fade into the blackness. It is time to say goodnight.
Q. (4) Which of the following alternatives to the underlined portion would NOT be acceptable?
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
Passage
Summer Creatures
The day was hot and sultry, but the cool of the evening approaches as the sun hides itself behind the horizon. Each
of us has pulled a lawn chair (1) onto the expansive wooden deck and (2) have settled in for the show. No one says a word.
A slight rustling in the thicket of maidenhair ferns off in the distance (3) can resonate; something is either bedding down or emerging for an evening hunt. A similar sound is barely audible just in front of (4) us, and we remain silent and attentive.
Suddenly, loud clucking penetrates the silence, (5) followed by more feverish clucking and chirping, some of it loud and commanding, some more soothing and calming. These are the sounds of wild turkey hens coming in to roost, (6) sounding off on safety issues and weather predictions. They cluck and rustle as they roam through the woods, final destination unknown. Here and there, a chickadee, finch, or red-headed woodpecker flies overhead toward a cozy nest. (7) The sky darkens and the last diurnal winged creature takes to its bed, the evening air begins to welcome its nocturnal flyers, namely fruit bats and night owls. The frenetic bats dart back and forth, high and low, as (8) they began filling their bellies with mosquitoes and other insects. Occasionally an owl will let out its soft “hoo-hoo.” This single call is enough to please the small crowd on the deck.
We begin to hear more rustling that seems much louder than before. As the evening light darkens, the field creatures become braver and bolder, their vision becoming more acute as ours fades with the disappearing light.
It is almost completely dark now, aside from the massive blanket of stars that lingers over our heads. (9) It is dizzying to look up and focus on individual stars, and equally disabling to scan the entire sky and take it in all at once. We still say nothing, except for an occasional whisper of “Did you hear that?” or “Wow.” The reverence is clear, the quiet awe palpable.
1. (10) Suddenly, we hear a single coyote howl way off in the distance, low and slightly tentative, followed shortly by another coyote baying, this time louder and more insistent.
2. We had been told that coyotes live here, but now we knew for sure.
3. The darkness falls all around us and the baying and howling grow louder.
4. Are the coyotes coming closer, or does sound become clearer as the night enfolds us?
5. It is difficult to know for (11) sure: but each subsequent “oowww-ooooh” brings us closer to moving inside the warm cabin. (12) We are (13) calm; but ready to give the night back to its rightful owners. Our skin (14) has cooled from the day’s heat and we have had our bedtime story. Just as we sense that the time has come to slip inside, the unmistakable flash of a streaking meteor (15) is catching our eyes and we jerk our heads upwards, just in time to see the shooting star fade into the blackness. It is time to say goodnight.
Q. (5)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
Passage
Summer Creatures
The day was hot and sultry, but the cool of the evening approaches as the sun hides itself behind the horizon. Each
of us has pulled a lawn chair (1) onto the expansive wooden deck and (2) have settled in for the show. No one says a word.
A slight rustling in the thicket of maidenhair ferns off in the distance (3) can resonate; something is either bedding down or emerging for an evening hunt. A similar sound is barely audible just in front of (4) us, and we remain silent and attentive.
Suddenly, loud clucking penetrates the silence, (5) followed by more feverish clucking and chirping, some of it loud and commanding, some more soothing and calming. These are the sounds of wild turkey hens coming in to roost, (6) sounding off on safety issues and weather predictions. They cluck and rustle as they roam through the woods, final destination unknown. Here and there, a chickadee, finch, or red-headed woodpecker flies overhead toward a cozy nest. (7) The sky darkens and the last diurnal winged creature takes to its bed, the evening air begins to welcome its nocturnal flyers, namely fruit bats and night owls. The frenetic bats dart back and forth, high and low, as (8) they began filling their bellies with mosquitoes and other insects. Occasionally an owl will let out its soft “hoo-hoo.” This single call is enough to please the small crowd on the deck.
We begin to hear more rustling that seems much louder than before. As the evening light darkens, the field creatures become braver and bolder, their vision becoming more acute as ours fades with the disappearing light.
It is almost completely dark now, aside from the massive blanket of stars that lingers over our heads. (9) It is dizzying to look up and focus on individual stars, and equally disabling to scan the entire sky and take it in all at once. We still say nothing, except for an occasional whisper of “Did you hear that?” or “Wow.” The reverence is clear, the quiet awe palpable.
1. (10) Suddenly, we hear a single coyote howl way off in the distance, low and slightly tentative, followed shortly by another coyote baying, this time louder and more insistent.
2. We had been told that coyotes live here, but now we knew for sure.
3. The darkness falls all around us and the baying and howling grow louder.
4. Are the coyotes coming closer, or does sound become clearer as the night enfolds us?
5. It is difficult to know for (11) sure: but each subsequent “oowww-ooooh” brings us closer to moving inside the warm cabin. (12) We are (13) calm; but ready to give the night back to its rightful owners. Our skin (14) has cooled from the day’s heat and we have had our bedtime story. Just as we sense that the time has come to slip inside, the unmistakable flash of a streaking meteor (15) is catching our eyes and we jerk our heads upwards, just in time to see the shooting star fade into the blackness. It is time to say goodnight.
Q. (6) At this point, the writer wants to liken the wild turkeys to people. Which choice would most effectively accomplish this purpose?
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
Passage
Summer Creatures
The day was hot and sultry, but the cool of the evening approaches as the sun hides itself behind the horizon. Each
of us has pulled a lawn chair (1) onto the expansive wooden deck and (2) have settled in for the show. No one says a word.
A slight rustling in the thicket of maidenhair ferns off in the distance (3) can resonate; something is either bedding down or emerging for an evening hunt. A similar sound is barely audible just in front of (4) us, and we remain silent and attentive.
Suddenly, loud clucking penetrates the silence, (5) followed by more feverish clucking and chirping, some of it loud and commanding, some more soothing and calming. These are the sounds of wild turkey hens coming in to roost, (6) sounding off on safety issues and weather predictions. They cluck and rustle as they roam through the woods, final destination unknown. Here and there, a chickadee, finch, or red-headed woodpecker flies overhead toward a cozy nest. (7) The sky darkens and the last diurnal winged creature takes to its bed, the evening air begins to welcome its nocturnal flyers, namely fruit bats and night owls. The frenetic bats dart back and forth, high and low, as (8) they began filling their bellies with mosquitoes and other insects. Occasionally an owl will let out its soft “hoo-hoo.” This single call is enough to please the small crowd on the deck.
We begin to hear more rustling that seems much louder than before. As the evening light darkens, the field creatures become braver and bolder, their vision becoming more acute as ours fades with the disappearing light.
It is almost completely dark now, aside from the massive blanket of stars that lingers over our heads. (9) It is dizzying to look up and focus on individual stars, and equally disabling to scan the entire sky and take it in all at once. We still say nothing, except for an occasional whisper of “Did you hear that?” or “Wow.” The reverence is clear, the quiet awe palpable.
1. (10) Suddenly, we hear a single coyote howl way off in the distance, low and slightly tentative, followed shortly by another coyote baying, this time louder and more insistent.
2. We had been told that coyotes live here, but now we knew for sure.
3. The darkness falls all around us and the baying and howling grow louder.
4. Are the coyotes coming closer, or does sound become clearer as the night enfolds us?
5. It is difficult to know for (11) sure: but each subsequent “oowww-ooooh” brings us closer to moving inside the warm cabin. (12) We are (13) calm; but ready to give the night back to its rightful owners. Our skin (14) has cooled from the day’s heat and we have had our bedtime story. Just as we sense that the time has come to slip inside, the unmistakable flash of a streaking meteor (15) is catching our eyes and we jerk our heads upwards, just in time to see the shooting star fade into the blackness. It is time to say goodnight.
Q. (7)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
Passage
Summer Creatures
The day was hot and sultry, but the cool of the evening approaches as the sun hides itself behind the horizon. Each
of us has pulled a lawn chair (1) onto the expansive wooden deck and (2) have settled in for the show. No one says a word.
A slight rustling in the thicket of maidenhair ferns off in the distance (3) can resonate; something is either bedding down or emerging for an evening hunt. A similar sound is barely audible just in front of (4) us, and we remain silent and attentive.
Suddenly, loud clucking penetrates the silence, (5) followed by more feverish clucking and chirping, some of it loud and commanding, some more soothing and calming. These are the sounds of wild turkey hens coming in to roost, (6) sounding off on safety issues and weather predictions. They cluck and rustle as they roam through the woods, final destination unknown. Here and there, a chickadee, finch, or red-headed woodpecker flies overhead toward a cozy nest. (7) The sky darkens and the last diurnal winged creature takes to its bed, the evening air begins to welcome its nocturnal flyers, namely fruit bats and night owls. The frenetic bats dart back and forth, high and low, as (8) they began filling their bellies with mosquitoes and other insects. Occasionally an owl will let out its soft “hoo-hoo.” This single call is enough to please the small crowd on the deck.
We begin to hear more rustling that seems much louder than before. As the evening light darkens, the field creatures become braver and bolder, their vision becoming more acute as ours fades with the disappearing light.
It is almost completely dark now, aside from the massive blanket of stars that lingers over our heads. (9) It is dizzying to look up and focus on individual stars, and equally disabling to scan the entire sky and take it in all at once. We still say nothing, except for an occasional whisper of “Did you hear that?” or “Wow.” The reverence is clear, the quiet awe palpable.
1. (10) Suddenly, we hear a single coyote howl way off in the distance, low and slightly tentative, followed shortly by another coyote baying, this time louder and more insistent.
2. We had been told that coyotes live here, but now we knew for sure.
3. The darkness falls all around us and the baying and howling grow louder.
4. Are the coyotes coming closer, or does sound become clearer as the night enfolds us?
5. It is difficult to know for (11) sure: but each subsequent “oowww-ooooh” brings us closer to moving inside the warm cabin. (12) We are (13) calm; but ready to give the night back to its rightful owners. Our skin (14) has cooled from the day’s heat and we have had our bedtime story. Just as we sense that the time has come to slip inside, the unmistakable flash of a streaking meteor (15) is catching our eyes and we jerk our heads upwards, just in time to see the shooting star fade into the blackness. It is time to say goodnight.
Q. (8)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
Passage
Summer Creatures
The day was hot and sultry, but the cool of the evening approaches as the sun hides itself behind the horizon. Each
of us has pulled a lawn chair (1) onto the expansive wooden deck and (2) have settled in for the show. No one says a word.
A slight rustling in the thicket of maidenhair ferns off in the distance (3) can resonate; something is either bedding down or emerging for an evening hunt. A similar sound is barely audible just in front of (4) us, and we remain silent and attentive.
Suddenly, loud clucking penetrates the silence, (5) followed by more feverish clucking and chirping, some of it loud and commanding, some more soothing and calming. These are the sounds of wild turkey hens coming in to roost, (6) sounding off on safety issues and weather predictions. They cluck and rustle as they roam through the woods, final destination unknown. Here and there, a chickadee, finch, or red-headed woodpecker flies overhead toward a cozy nest. (7) The sky darkens and the last diurnal winged creature takes to its bed, the evening air begins to welcome its nocturnal flyers, namely fruit bats and night owls. The frenetic bats dart back and forth, high and low, as (8) they began filling their bellies with mosquitoes and other insects. Occasionally an owl will let out its soft “hoo-hoo.” This single call is enough to please the small crowd on the deck.
We begin to hear more rustling that seems much louder than before. As the evening light darkens, the field creatures become braver and bolder, their vision becoming more acute as ours fades with the disappearing light.
It is almost completely dark now, aside from the massive blanket of stars that lingers over our heads. (9) It is dizzying to look up and focus on individual stars, and equally disabling to scan the entire sky and take it in all at once. We still say nothing, except for an occasional whisper of “Did you hear that?” or “Wow.” The reverence is clear, the quiet awe palpable.
1. (10) Suddenly, we hear a single coyote howl way off in the distance, low and slightly tentative, followed shortly by another coyote baying, this time louder and more insistent.
2. We had been told that coyotes live here, but now we knew for sure.
3. The darkness falls all around us and the baying and howling grow louder.
4. Are the coyotes coming closer, or does sound become clearer as the night enfolds us?
5. It is difficult to know for (11) sure: but each subsequent “oowww-ooooh” brings us closer to moving inside the warm cabin. (12) We are (13) calm; but ready to give the night back to its rightful owners. Our skin (14) has cooled from the day’s heat and we have had our bedtime story. Just as we sense that the time has come to slip inside, the unmistakable flash of a streaking meteor (15) is catching our eyes and we jerk our heads upwards, just in time to see the shooting star fade into the blackness. It is time to say goodnight.
Q. (9) Given that all of the following are true, which sentence, if added here, would provide the most effective support for the statements made regarding the night sky?
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
Passage
Summer Creatures
The day was hot and sultry, but the cool of the evening approaches as the sun hides itself behind the horizon. Each
of us has pulled a lawn chair (1) onto the expansive wooden deck and (2) have settled in for the show. No one says a word.
A slight rustling in the thicket of maidenhair ferns off in the distance (3) can resonate; something is either bedding down or emerging for an evening hunt. A similar sound is barely audible just in front of (4) us, and we remain silent and attentive.
Suddenly, loud clucking penetrates the silence, (5) followed by more feverish clucking and chirping, some of it loud and commanding, some more soothing and calming. These are the sounds of wild turkey hens coming in to roost, (6) sounding off on safety issues and weather predictions. They cluck and rustle as they roam through the woods, final destination unknown. Here and there, a chickadee, finch, or red-headed woodpecker flies overhead toward a cozy nest. (7) The sky darkens and the last diurnal winged creature takes to its bed, the evening air begins to welcome its nocturnal flyers, namely fruit bats and night owls. The frenetic bats dart back and forth, high and low, as (8) they began filling their bellies with mosquitoes and other insects. Occasionally an owl will let out its soft “hoo-hoo.” This single call is enough to please the small crowd on the deck.
We begin to hear more rustling that seems much louder than before. As the evening light darkens, the field creatures become braver and bolder, their vision becoming more acute as ours fades with the disappearing light.
It is almost completely dark now, aside from the massive blanket of stars that lingers over our heads. (9) It is dizzying to look up and focus on individual stars, and equally disabling to scan the entire sky and take it in all at once. We still say nothing, except for an occasional whisper of “Did you hear that?” or “Wow.” The reverence is clear, the quiet awe palpable.
1. (10) Suddenly, we hear a single coyote howl way off in the distance, low and slightly tentative, followed shortly by another coyote baying, this time louder and more insistent.
2. We had been told that coyotes live here, but now we knew for sure.
3. The darkness falls all around us and the baying and howling grow louder.
4. Are the coyotes coming closer, or does sound become clearer as the night enfolds us?
5. It is difficult to know for (11) sure: but each subsequent “oowww-ooooh” brings us closer to moving inside the warm cabin. (12) We are (13) calm; but ready to give the night back to its rightful owners. Our skin (14) has cooled from the day’s heat and we have had our bedtime story. Just as we sense that the time has come to slip inside, the unmistakable flash of a streaking meteor (15) is catching our eyes and we jerk our heads upwards, just in time to see the shooting star fade into the blackness. It is time to say goodnight.
Q. (10) Given that all of the choices are true, which one would most effectively introduce the subject of this paragraph and maintain the tone of the essay?
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
Passage
Summer Creatures
The day was hot and sultry, but the cool of the evening approaches as the sun hides itself behind the horizon. Each
of us has pulled a lawn chair (1) onto the expansive wooden deck and (2) have settled in for the show. No one says a word.
A slight rustling in the thicket of maidenhair ferns off in the distance (3) can resonate; something is either bedding down or emerging for an evening hunt. A similar sound is barely audible just in front of (4) us, and we remain silent and attentive.
Suddenly, loud clucking penetrates the silence, (5) followed by more feverish clucking and chirping, some of it loud and commanding, some more soothing and calming. These are the sounds of wild turkey hens coming in to roost, (6) sounding off on safety issues and weather predictions. They cluck and rustle as they roam through the woods, final destination unknown. Here and there, a chickadee, finch, or red-headed woodpecker flies overhead toward a cozy nest. (7) The sky darkens and the last diurnal winged creature takes to its bed, the evening air begins to welcome its nocturnal flyers, namely fruit bats and night owls. The frenetic bats dart back and forth, high and low, as (8) they began filling their bellies with mosquitoes and other insects. Occasionally an owl will let out its soft “hoo-hoo.” This single call is enough to please the small crowd on the deck.
We begin to hear more rustling that seems much louder than before. As the evening light darkens, the field creatures become braver and bolder, their vision becoming more acute as ours fades with the disappearing light.
It is almost completely dark now, aside from the massive blanket of stars that lingers over our heads. (9) It is dizzying to look up and focus on individual stars, and equally disabling to scan the entire sky and take it in all at once. We still say nothing, except for an occasional whisper of “Did you hear that?” or “Wow.” The reverence is clear, the quiet awe palpable.
1. (10) Suddenly, we hear a single coyote howl way off in the distance, low and slightly tentative, followed shortly by another coyote baying, this time louder and more insistent.
2. We had been told that coyotes live here, but now we knew for sure.
3. The darkness falls all around us and the baying and howling grow louder.
4. Are the coyotes coming closer, or does sound become clearer as the night enfolds us?
5. It is difficult to know for (11) sure: but each subsequent “oowww-ooooh” brings us closer to moving inside the warm cabin. (12) We are (13) calm; but ready to give the night back to its rightful owners. Our skin (14) has cooled from the day’s heat and we have had our bedtime story. Just as we sense that the time has come to slip inside, the unmistakable flash of a streaking meteor (15) is catching our eyes and we jerk our heads upwards, just in time to see the shooting star fade into the blackness. It is time to say goodnight.
Q. (11)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
Passage
Summer Creatures
The day was hot and sultry, but the cool of the evening approaches as the sun hides itself behind the horizon. Each
of us has pulled a lawn chair (1) onto the expansive wooden deck and (2) have settled in for the show. No one says a word.
A slight rustling in the thicket of maidenhair ferns off in the distance (3) can resonate; something is either bedding down or emerging for an evening hunt. A similar sound is barely audible just in front of (4) us, and we remain silent and attentive.
Suddenly, loud clucking penetrates the silence, (5) followed by more feverish clucking and chirping, some of it loud and commanding, some more soothing and calming. These are the sounds of wild turkey hens coming in to roost, (6) sounding off on safety issues and weather predictions. They cluck and rustle as they roam through the woods, final destination unknown. Here and there, a chickadee, finch, or red-headed woodpecker flies overhead toward a cozy nest. (7) The sky darkens and the last diurnal winged creature takes to its bed, the evening air begins to welcome its nocturnal flyers, namely fruit bats and night owls. The frenetic bats dart back and forth, high and low, as (8) they began filling their bellies with mosquitoes and other insects. Occasionally an owl will let out its soft “hoo-hoo.” This single call is enough to please the small crowd on the deck.
We begin to hear more rustling that seems much louder than before. As the evening light darkens, the field creatures become braver and bolder, their vision becoming more acute as ours fades with the disappearing light.
It is almost completely dark now, aside from the massive blanket of stars that lingers over our heads. (9) It is dizzying to look up and focus on individual stars, and equally disabling to scan the entire sky and take it in all at once. We still say nothing, except for an occasional whisper of “Did you hear that?” or “Wow.” The reverence is clear, the quiet awe palpable.
1. (10) Suddenly, we hear a single coyote howl way off in the distance, low and slightly tentative, followed shortly by another coyote baying, this time louder and more insistent.
2. We had been told that coyotes live here, but now we knew for sure.
3. The darkness falls all around us and the baying and howling grow louder.
4. Are the coyotes coming closer, or does sound become clearer as the night enfolds us?
5. It is difficult to know for (11) sure: but each subsequent “oowww-ooooh” brings us closer to moving inside the warm cabin. (12) We are (13) calm; but ready to give the night back to its rightful owners. Our skin (14) has cooled from the day’s heat and we have had our bedtime story. Just as we sense that the time has come to slip inside, the unmistakable flash of a streaking meteor (15) is catching our eyes and we jerk our heads upwards, just in time to see the shooting star fade into the blackness. It is time to say goodnight.
Q. (12) Which of the following sentences in this paragraph is LEAST relevant to the main focus of the essay and, therefore, could be deleted?
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
Passage
Summer Creatures
The day was hot and sultry, but the cool of the evening approaches as the sun hides itself behind the horizon. Each
of us has pulled a lawn chair (1) onto the expansive wooden deck and (2) have settled in for the show. No one says a word.
A slight rustling in the thicket of maidenhair ferns off in the distance (3) can resonate; something is either bedding down or emerging for an evening hunt. A similar sound is barely audible just in front of (4) us, and we remain silent and attentive.
Suddenly, loud clucking penetrates the silence, (5) followed by more feverish clucking and chirping, some of it loud and commanding, some more soothing and calming. These are the sounds of wild turkey hens coming in to roost, (6) sounding off on safety issues and weather predictions. They cluck and rustle as they roam through the woods, final destination unknown. Here and there, a chickadee, finch, or red-headed woodpecker flies overhead toward a cozy nest. (7) The sky darkens and the last diurnal winged creature takes to its bed, the evening air begins to welcome its nocturnal flyers, namely fruit bats and night owls. The frenetic bats dart back and forth, high and low, as (8) they began filling their bellies with mosquitoes and other insects. Occasionally an owl will let out its soft “hoo-hoo.” This single call is enough to please the small crowd on the deck.
We begin to hear more rustling that seems much louder than before. As the evening light darkens, the field creatures become braver and bolder, their vision becoming more acute as ours fades with the disappearing light.
It is almost completely dark now, aside from the massive blanket of stars that lingers over our heads. (9) It is dizzying to look up and focus on individual stars, and equally disabling to scan the entire sky and take it in all at once. We still say nothing, except for an occasional whisper of “Did you hear that?” or “Wow.” The reverence is clear, the quiet awe palpable.
1. (10) Suddenly, we hear a single coyote howl way off in the distance, low and slightly tentative, followed shortly by another coyote baying, this time louder and more insistent.
2. We had been told that coyotes live here, but now we knew for sure.
3. The darkness falls all around us and the baying and howling grow louder.
4. Are the coyotes coming closer, or does sound become clearer as the night enfolds us?
5. It is difficult to know for (11) sure: but each subsequent “oowww-ooooh” brings us closer to moving inside the warm cabin. (12) We are (13) calm; but ready to give the night back to its rightful owners. Our skin (14) has cooled from the day’s heat and we have had our bedtime story. Just as we sense that the time has come to slip inside, the unmistakable flash of a streaking meteor (15) is catching our eyes and we jerk our heads upwards, just in time to see the shooting star fade into the blackness. It is time to say goodnight.
Q. (13)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
Passage
Summer Creatures
The day was hot and sultry, but the cool of the evening approaches as the sun hides itself behind the horizon. Each
of us has pulled a lawn chair (1) onto the expansive wooden deck and (2) have settled in for the show. No one says a word.
A slight rustling in the thicket of maidenhair ferns off in the distance (3) can resonate; something is either bedding down or emerging for an evening hunt. A similar sound is barely audible just in front of (4) us, and we remain silent and attentive.
Suddenly, loud clucking penetrates the silence, (5) followed by more feverish clucking and chirping, some of it loud and commanding, some more soothing and calming. These are the sounds of wild turkey hens coming in to roost, (6) sounding off on safety issues and weather predictions. They cluck and rustle as they roam through the woods, final destination unknown. Here and there, a chickadee, finch, or red-headed woodpecker flies overhead toward a cozy nest. (7) The sky darkens and the last diurnal winged creature takes to its bed, the evening air begins to welcome its nocturnal flyers, namely fruit bats and night owls. The frenetic bats dart back and forth, high and low, as (8) they began filling their bellies with mosquitoes and other insects. Occasionally an owl will let out its soft “hoo-hoo.” This single call is enough to please the small crowd on the deck.
We begin to hear more rustling that seems much louder than before. As the evening light darkens, the field creatures become braver and bolder, their vision becoming more acute as ours fades with the disappearing light.
It is almost completely dark now, aside from the massive blanket of stars that lingers over our heads. (9) It is dizzying to look up and focus on individual stars, and equally disabling to scan the entire sky and take it in all at once. We still say nothing, except for an occasional whisper of “Did you hear that?” or “Wow.” The reverence is clear, the quiet awe palpable.
1. (10) Suddenly, we hear a single coyote howl way off in the distance, low and slightly tentative, followed shortly by another coyote baying, this time louder and more insistent.
2. We had been told that coyotes live here, but now we knew for sure.
3. The darkness falls all around us and the baying and howling grow louder.
4. Are the coyotes coming closer, or does sound become clearer as the night enfolds us?
5. It is difficult to know for (11) sure: but each subsequent “oowww-ooooh” brings us closer to moving inside the warm cabin. (12) We are (13) calm; but ready to give the night back to its rightful owners. Our skin (14) has cooled from the day’s heat and we have had our bedtime story. Just as we sense that the time has come to slip inside, the unmistakable flash of a streaking meteor (15) is catching our eyes and we jerk our heads upwards, just in time to see the shooting star fade into the blackness. It is time to say goodnight.
Q. (14)
Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.
Passage
Summer Creatures
The day was hot and sultry, but the cool of the evening approaches as the sun hides itself behind the horizon. Each
of us has pulled a lawn chair (1) onto the expansive wooden deck and (2) have settled in for the show. No one says a word.
A slight rustling in the thicket of maidenhair ferns off in the distance (3) can resonate; something is either bedding down or emerging for an evening hunt. A similar sound is barely audible just in front of (4) us, and we remain silent and attentive.
Suddenly, loud clucking penetrates the silence, (5) followed by more feverish clucking and chirping, some of it loud and commanding, some more soothing and calming. These are the sounds of wild turkey hens coming in to roost, (6) sounding off on safety issues and weather predictions. They cluck and rustle as they roam through the woods, final destination unknown. Here and there, a chickadee, finch, or red-headed woodpecker flies overhead toward a cozy nest. (7) The sky darkens and the last diurnal winged creature takes to its bed, the evening air begins to welcome its nocturnal flyers, namely fruit bats and night owls. The frenetic bats dart back and forth, high and low, as (8) they began filling their bellies with mosquitoes and other insects. Occasionally an owl will let out its soft “hoo-hoo.” This single call is enough to please the small crowd on the deck.
We begin to hear more rustling that seems much louder than before. As the evening light darkens, the field creatures become braver and bolder, their vision becoming more acute as ours fades with the disappearing light.
It is almost completely dark now, aside from the massive blanket of stars that lingers over our heads. (9) It is dizzying to look up and focus on individual stars, and equally disabling to scan the entire sky and take it in all at once. We still say nothing, except for an occasional whisper of “Did you hear that?” or “Wow.” The reverence is clear, the quiet awe palpable.
1. (10) Suddenly, we hear a single coyote howl way off in the distance, low and slightly tentative, followed shortly by another coyote baying, this time louder and more insistent.
2. We had been told that coyotes live here, but now we knew for sure.
3. The darkness falls all around us and the baying and howling grow louder.
4. Are the coyotes coming closer, or does sound become clearer as the night enfolds us?
5. It is difficult to know for (11) sure: but each subsequent “oowww-ooooh” brings us closer to moving inside the warm cabin. (12) We are (13) calm; but ready to give the night back to its rightful owners. Our skin (14) has cooled from the day’s heat and we have had our bedtime story. Just as we sense that the time has come to slip inside, the unmistakable flash of a streaking meteor (15) is catching our eyes and we jerk our heads upwards, just in time to see the shooting star fade into the blackness. It is time to say goodnight.
Q. (15)