Mock Test - 7 - ACT MCQ

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
The Deer Fence
A family emergency took us across the country for several weeks during the spring of (1) that year. We had left our first vegetable garden in the midst of early growing season, a time when (2) careful monitoring of emerging seeds is essential to ensure their vitality. Only a serious family matter would have (3) as an instigation for such a departure.
We arrived home three weeks later (4) to witness an incredible transformation (5) upon our return. Not only had the broccoli stalks and scarlet radishes come to bear fruit, but (6) they are the local deer population had decided to make a meal of our freshly sprouted crop. Deer do not use a freshly sharpened kitchen knife to remove delicious morsels from their stems. Rather, the animals gnaw and shred at the plants with their vegetarian teeth, leaving a mess of rejected foliage, hoof prints, and raw vegetable soup. (7)
Our four-foot twig garden fence suddenly appeared comical and (8) humorously purely decorative. There was obviously a lack of real (9) deterring qualities, that needed to be remedied quickly. Even though we were now back home to stand guard, our absence had inadvertently established our kitchen garden as a food plot for the nearby wildlife. Deer are typically night eaters, and we weren’t about to change our own sleeping patterns to accommodate them! Stopping the deer would (10) require a concerted, multi-pronged approach.
(11) Following a tedious journey to the local hardware store, we assembled our army’s ammunition: 350 feet of chicken wire; a box of four-inch screws; neon-orange plastic ribbon; and a heavy duty staple gun. Unrolling a 350-foot roll of chicken wire is no easy task. Constructing the bottom tier of the fence was (12) just as daunting; one person unrolled the four-foot wide tube while another person followed behind, stapling the chicken wire to the existing fence posts. Tackling the second row was another story altogether. Since our original posts were a mere four feet high, each post needed a four-foot extension attached to it, followed by another round of chicken wire.
After hours of back-breaking work, we stood back to admire (13) this new fence. The big test would come when darkness fell. Deer can and will leap over an eight-foot barrier if necessary, but our saving grace would be the intimidation factor of our new fence, with its metallic outline glinting in the moonlight and neon-orange tags flapping in the wind. (14) Swift and beautiful leapers, the newness and appearance of the enclosure should nonetheless serve to frighten away our backyard deer.
It has been two months since the transformation of our little twig-fenced garden into a chicken-wired vegetable prison. Each night we sit down (15) to the likes of delicious sweet corn, baked zucchini, tomato and cucumber salad, and snap beans. No broccoli or radishes this year, but we’re already discussing the blueberry bushes and strawberry plants for next year. First, though, we will give some serious thought to the black bears that live in our woods.

Q. (4)

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
The Deer Fence
A family emergency took us across the country for several weeks during the spring of (1) that year. We had left our first vegetable garden in the midst of early growing season, a time when (2) careful monitoring of emerging seeds is essential to ensure their vitality. Only a serious family matter would have (3) as an instigation for such a departure.
We arrived home three weeks later (4) to witness an incredible transformation (5) upon our return. Not only had the broccoli stalks and scarlet radishes come to bear fruit, but (6) they are the local deer population had decided to make a meal of our freshly sprouted crop. Deer do not use a freshly sharpened kitchen knife to remove delicious morsels from their stems. Rather, the animals gnaw and shred at the plants with their vegetarian teeth, leaving a mess of rejected foliage, hoof prints, and raw vegetable soup. (7)
Our four-foot twig garden fence suddenly appeared comical and (8) humorously purely decorative. There was obviously a lack of real (9) deterring qualities, that needed to be remedied quickly. Even though we were now back home to stand guard, our absence had inadvertently established our kitchen garden as a food plot for the nearby wildlife. Deer are typically night eaters, and we weren’t about to change our own sleeping patterns to accommodate them! Stopping the deer would (10) require a concerted, multi-pronged approach.
(11) Following a tedious journey to the local hardware store, we assembled our army’s ammunition: 350 feet of chicken wire; a box of four-inch screws; neon-orange plastic ribbon; and a heavy duty staple gun. Unrolling a 350-foot roll of chicken wire is no easy task. Constructing the bottom tier of the fence was (12) just as daunting; one person unrolled the four-foot wide tube while another person followed behind, stapling the chicken wire to the existing fence posts. Tackling the second row was another story altogether. Since our original posts were a mere four feet high, each post needed a four-foot extension attached to it, followed by another round of chicken wire.
After hours of back-breaking work, we stood back to admire (13) this new fence. The big test would come when darkness fell. Deer can and will leap over an eight-foot barrier if necessary, but our saving grace would be the intimidation factor of our new fence, with its metallic outline glinting in the moonlight and neon-orange tags flapping in the wind. (14) Swift and beautiful leapers, the newness and appearance of the enclosure should nonetheless serve to frighten away our backyard deer.
It has been two months since the transformation of our little twig-fenced garden into a chicken-wired vegetable prison. Each night we sit down (15) to the likes of delicious sweet corn, baked zucchini, tomato and cucumber salad, and snap beans. No broccoli or radishes this year, but we’re already discussing the blueberry bushes and strawberry plants for next year. First, though, we will give some serious thought to the black bears that live in our woods.

Q. (5)

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
The Deer Fence
A family emergency took us across the country for several weeks during the spring of (1) that year. We had left our first vegetable garden in the midst of early growing season, a time when (2) careful monitoring of emerging seeds is essential to ensure their vitality. Only a serious family matter would have (3) as an instigation for such a departure.
We arrived home three weeks later (4) to witness an incredible transformation (5) upon our return. Not only had the broccoli stalks and scarlet radishes come to bear fruit, but (6) they are the local deer population had decided to make a meal of our freshly sprouted crop. Deer do not use a freshly sharpened kitchen knife to remove delicious morsels from their stems. Rather, the animals gnaw and shred at the plants with their vegetarian teeth, leaving a mess of rejected foliage, hoof prints, and raw vegetable soup. (7)
Our four-foot twig garden fence suddenly appeared comical and (8) humorously purely decorative. There was obviously a lack of real (9) deterring qualities, that needed to be remedied quickly. Even though we were now back home to stand guard, our absence had inadvertently established our kitchen garden as a food plot for the nearby wildlife. Deer are typically night eaters, and we weren’t about to change our own sleeping patterns to accommodate them! Stopping the deer would (10) require a concerted, multi-pronged approach.
(11) Following a tedious journey to the local hardware store, we assembled our army’s ammunition: 350 feet of chicken wire; a box of four-inch screws; neon-orange plastic ribbon; and a heavy duty staple gun. Unrolling a 350-foot roll of chicken wire is no easy task. Constructing the bottom tier of the fence was (12) just as daunting; one person unrolled the four-foot wide tube while another person followed behind, stapling the chicken wire to the existing fence posts. Tackling the second row was another story altogether. Since our original posts were a mere four feet high, each post needed a four-foot extension attached to it, followed by another round of chicken wire.
After hours of back-breaking work, we stood back to admire (13) this new fence. The big test would come when darkness fell. Deer can and will leap over an eight-foot barrier if necessary, but our saving grace would be the intimidation factor of our new fence, with its metallic outline glinting in the moonlight and neon-orange tags flapping in the wind. (14) Swift and beautiful leapers, the newness and appearance of the enclosure should nonetheless serve to frighten away our backyard deer.
It has been two months since the transformation of our little twig-fenced garden into a chicken-wired vegetable prison. Each night we sit down (15) to the likes of delicious sweet corn, baked zucchini, tomato and cucumber salad, and snap beans. No broccoli or radishes this year, but we’re already discussing the blueberry bushes and strawberry plants for next year. First, though, we will give some serious thought to the black bears that live in our woods.

Q. (6)

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
The Deer Fence
A family emergency took us across the country for several weeks during the spring of (1) that year. We had left our first vegetable garden in the midst of early growing season, a time when (2) careful monitoring of emerging seeds is essential to ensure their vitality. Only a serious family matter would have (3) as an instigation for such a departure.
We arrived home three weeks later (4) to witness an incredible transformation (5) upon our return. Not only had the broccoli stalks and scarlet radishes come to bear fruit, but (6) they are the local deer population had decided to make a meal of our freshly sprouted crop. Deer do not use a freshly sharpened kitchen knife to remove delicious morsels from their stems. Rather, the animals gnaw and shred at the plants with their vegetarian teeth, leaving a mess of rejected foliage, hoof prints, and raw vegetable soup. (7)
Our four-foot twig garden fence suddenly appeared comical and (8) humorously purely decorative. There was obviously a lack of real (9) deterring qualities, that needed to be remedied quickly. Even though we were now back home to stand guard, our absence had inadvertently established our kitchen garden as a food plot for the nearby wildlife. Deer are typically night eaters, and we weren’t about to change our own sleeping patterns to accommodate them! Stopping the deer would (10) require a concerted, multi-pronged approach.
(11) Following a tedious journey to the local hardware store, we assembled our army’s ammunition: 350 feet of chicken wire; a box of four-inch screws; neon-orange plastic ribbon; and a heavy duty staple gun. Unrolling a 350-foot roll of chicken wire is no easy task. Constructing the bottom tier of the fence was (12) just as daunting; one person unrolled the four-foot wide tube while another person followed behind, stapling the chicken wire to the existing fence posts. Tackling the second row was another story altogether. Since our original posts were a mere four feet high, each post needed a four-foot extension attached to it, followed by another round of chicken wire.
After hours of back-breaking work, we stood back to admire (13) this new fence. The big test would come when darkness fell. Deer can and will leap over an eight-foot barrier if necessary, but our saving grace would be the intimidation factor of our new fence, with its metallic outline glinting in the moonlight and neon-orange tags flapping in the wind. (14) Swift and beautiful leapers, the newness and appearance of the enclosure should nonetheless serve to frighten away our backyard deer.
It has been two months since the transformation of our little twig-fenced garden into a chicken-wired vegetable prison. Each night we sit down (15) to the likes of delicious sweet corn, baked zucchini, tomato and cucumber salad, and snap beans. No broccoli or radishes this year, but we’re already discussing the blueberry bushes and strawberry plants for next year. First, though, we will give some serious thought to the black bears that live in our woods.

Q. (7) The writer is considering deleting the phrase “leaving a mess of rejected foliage, hoof prints, and raw vegetable soup” from the preceding sentence. Should the phrase be kept or deleted?

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
The Deer Fence
A family emergency took us across the country for several weeks during the spring of (1) that year. We had left our first vegetable garden in the midst of early growing season, a time when (2) careful monitoring of emerging seeds is essential to ensure their vitality. Only a serious family matter would have (3) as an instigation for such a departure.
We arrived home three weeks later (4) to witness an incredible transformation (5) upon our return. Not only had the broccoli stalks and scarlet radishes come to bear fruit, but (6) they are the local deer population had decided to make a meal of our freshly sprouted crop. Deer do not use a freshly sharpened kitchen knife to remove delicious morsels from their stems. Rather, the animals gnaw and shred at the plants with their vegetarian teeth, leaving a mess of rejected foliage, hoof prints, and raw vegetable soup. (7)
Our four-foot twig garden fence suddenly appeared comical and (8) humorously purely decorative. There was obviously a lack of real (9) deterring qualities, that needed to be remedied quickly. Even though we were now back home to stand guard, our absence had inadvertently established our kitchen garden as a food plot for the nearby wildlife. Deer are typically night eaters, and we weren’t about to change our own sleeping patterns to accommodate them! Stopping the deer would (10) require a concerted, multi-pronged approach.
(11) Following a tedious journey to the local hardware store, we assembled our army’s ammunition: 350 feet of chicken wire; a box of four-inch screws; neon-orange plastic ribbon; and a heavy duty staple gun. Unrolling a 350-foot roll of chicken wire is no easy task. Constructing the bottom tier of the fence was (12) just as daunting; one person unrolled the four-foot wide tube while another person followed behind, stapling the chicken wire to the existing fence posts. Tackling the second row was another story altogether. Since our original posts were a mere four feet high, each post needed a four-foot extension attached to it, followed by another round of chicken wire.
After hours of back-breaking work, we stood back to admire (13) this new fence. The big test would come when darkness fell. Deer can and will leap over an eight-foot barrier if necessary, but our saving grace would be the intimidation factor of our new fence, with its metallic outline glinting in the moonlight and neon-orange tags flapping in the wind. (14) Swift and beautiful leapers, the newness and appearance of the enclosure should nonetheless serve to frighten away our backyard deer.
It has been two months since the transformation of our little twig-fenced garden into a chicken-wired vegetable prison. Each night we sit down (15) to the likes of delicious sweet corn, baked zucchini, tomato and cucumber salad, and snap beans. No broccoli or radishes this year, but we’re already discussing the blueberry bushes and strawberry plants for next year. First, though, we will give some serious thought to the black bears that live in our woods.

Q. (8)

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
The Deer Fence
A family emergency took us across the country for several weeks during the spring of (1) that year. We had left our first vegetable garden in the midst of early growing season, a time when (2) careful monitoring of emerging seeds is essential to ensure their vitality. Only a serious family matter would have (3) as an instigation for such a departure.
We arrived home three weeks later (4) to witness an incredible transformation (5) upon our return. Not only had the broccoli stalks and scarlet radishes come to bear fruit, but (6) they are the local deer population had decided to make a meal of our freshly sprouted crop. Deer do not use a freshly sharpened kitchen knife to remove delicious morsels from their stems. Rather, the animals gnaw and shred at the plants with their vegetarian teeth, leaving a mess of rejected foliage, hoof prints, and raw vegetable soup. (7)
Our four-foot twig garden fence suddenly appeared comical and (8) humorously purely decorative. There was obviously a lack of real (9) deterring qualities, that needed to be remedied quickly. Even though we were now back home to stand guard, our absence had inadvertently established our kitchen garden as a food plot for the nearby wildlife. Deer are typically night eaters, and we weren’t about to change our own sleeping patterns to accommodate them! Stopping the deer would (10) require a concerted, multi-pronged approach.
(11) Following a tedious journey to the local hardware store, we assembled our army’s ammunition: 350 feet of chicken wire; a box of four-inch screws; neon-orange plastic ribbon; and a heavy duty staple gun. Unrolling a 350-foot roll of chicken wire is no easy task. Constructing the bottom tier of the fence was (12) just as daunting; one person unrolled the four-foot wide tube while another person followed behind, stapling the chicken wire to the existing fence posts. Tackling the second row was another story altogether. Since our original posts were a mere four feet high, each post needed a four-foot extension attached to it, followed by another round of chicken wire.
After hours of back-breaking work, we stood back to admire (13) this new fence. The big test would come when darkness fell. Deer can and will leap over an eight-foot barrier if necessary, but our saving grace would be the intimidation factor of our new fence, with its metallic outline glinting in the moonlight and neon-orange tags flapping in the wind. (14) Swift and beautiful leapers, the newness and appearance of the enclosure should nonetheless serve to frighten away our backyard deer.
It has been two months since the transformation of our little twig-fenced garden into a chicken-wired vegetable prison. Each night we sit down (15) to the likes of delicious sweet corn, baked zucchini, tomato and cucumber salad, and snap beans. No broccoli or radishes this year, but we’re already discussing the blueberry bushes and strawberry plants for next year. First, though, we will give some serious thought to the black bears that live in our woods.

Q. (9)

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
The Deer Fence
A family emergency took us across the country for several weeks during the spring of (1) that year. We had left our first vegetable garden in the midst of early growing season, a time when (2) careful monitoring of emerging seeds is essential to ensure their vitality. Only a serious family matter would have (3) as an instigation for such a departure.
We arrived home three weeks later (4) to witness an incredible transformation (5) upon our return. Not only had the broccoli stalks and scarlet radishes come to bear fruit, but (6) they are the local deer population had decided to make a meal of our freshly sprouted crop. Deer do not use a freshly sharpened kitchen knife to remove delicious morsels from their stems. Rather, the animals gnaw and shred at the plants with their vegetarian teeth, leaving a mess of rejected foliage, hoof prints, and raw vegetable soup. (7)
Our four-foot twig garden fence suddenly appeared comical and (8) humorously purely decorative. There was obviously a lack of real (9) deterring qualities, that needed to be remedied quickly. Even though we were now back home to stand guard, our absence had inadvertently established our kitchen garden as a food plot for the nearby wildlife. Deer are typically night eaters, and we weren’t about to change our own sleeping patterns to accommodate them! Stopping the deer would (10) require a concerted, multi-pronged approach.
(11) Following a tedious journey to the local hardware store, we assembled our army’s ammunition: 350 feet of chicken wire; a box of four-inch screws; neon-orange plastic ribbon; and a heavy duty staple gun. Unrolling a 350-foot roll of chicken wire is no easy task. Constructing the bottom tier of the fence was (12) just as daunting; one person unrolled the four-foot wide tube while another person followed behind, stapling the chicken wire to the existing fence posts. Tackling the second row was another story altogether. Since our original posts were a mere four feet high, each post needed a four-foot extension attached to it, followed by another round of chicken wire.
After hours of back-breaking work, we stood back to admire (13) this new fence. The big test would come when darkness fell. Deer can and will leap over an eight-foot barrier if necessary, but our saving grace would be the intimidation factor of our new fence, with its metallic outline glinting in the moonlight and neon-orange tags flapping in the wind. (14) Swift and beautiful leapers, the newness and appearance of the enclosure should nonetheless serve to frighten away our backyard deer.
It has been two months since the transformation of our little twig-fenced garden into a chicken-wired vegetable prison. Each night we sit down (15) to the likes of delicious sweet corn, baked zucchini, tomato and cucumber salad, and snap beans. No broccoli or radishes this year, but we’re already discussing the blueberry bushes and strawberry plants for next year. First, though, we will give some serious thought to the black bears that live in our woods.

Q. (10) The writer would like to indicate that protecting the garden from future destruction will be time-consuming and must be well planned. Given that all choices are true, which one best accomplishes the writer’s goal?

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
The Deer Fence
A family emergency took us across the country for several weeks during the spring of (1) that year. We had left our first vegetable garden in the midst of early growing season, a time when (2) careful monitoring of emerging seeds is essential to ensure their vitality. Only a serious family matter would have (3) as an instigation for such a departure.
We arrived home three weeks later (4) to witness an incredible transformation (5) upon our return. Not only had the broccoli stalks and scarlet radishes come to bear fruit, but (6) they are the local deer population had decided to make a meal of our freshly sprouted crop. Deer do not use a freshly sharpened kitchen knife to remove delicious morsels from their stems. Rather, the animals gnaw and shred at the plants with their vegetarian teeth, leaving a mess of rejected foliage, hoof prints, and raw vegetable soup. (7)
Our four-foot twig garden fence suddenly appeared comical and (8) humorously purely decorative. There was obviously a lack of real (9) deterring qualities, that needed to be remedied quickly. Even though we were now back home to stand guard, our absence had inadvertently established our kitchen garden as a food plot for the nearby wildlife. Deer are typically night eaters, and we weren’t about to change our own sleeping patterns to accommodate them! Stopping the deer would (10) require a concerted, multi-pronged approach.
(11) Following a tedious journey to the local hardware store, we assembled our army’s ammunition: 350 feet of chicken wire; a box of four-inch screws; neon-orange plastic ribbon; and a heavy duty staple gun. Unrolling a 350-foot roll of chicken wire is no easy task. Constructing the bottom tier of the fence was (12) just as daunting; one person unrolled the four-foot wide tube while another person followed behind, stapling the chicken wire to the existing fence posts. Tackling the second row was another story altogether. Since our original posts were a mere four feet high, each post needed a four-foot extension attached to it, followed by another round of chicken wire.
After hours of back-breaking work, we stood back to admire (13) this new fence. The big test would come when darkness fell. Deer can and will leap over an eight-foot barrier if necessary, but our saving grace would be the intimidation factor of our new fence, with its metallic outline glinting in the moonlight and neon-orange tags flapping in the wind. (14) Swift and beautiful leapers, the newness and appearance of the enclosure should nonetheless serve to frighten away our backyard deer.
It has been two months since the transformation of our little twig-fenced garden into a chicken-wired vegetable prison. Each night we sit down (15) to the likes of delicious sweet corn, baked zucchini, tomato and cucumber salad, and snap beans. No broccoli or radishes this year, but we’re already discussing the blueberry bushes and strawberry plants for next year. First, though, we will give some serious thought to the black bears that live in our woods.

Q. (11) Which of the following alternatives to the underlined portion would NOT be acceptable?

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
The Deer Fence
A family emergency took us across the country for several weeks during the spring of (1) that year. We had left our first vegetable garden in the midst of early growing season, a time when (2) careful monitoring of emerging seeds is essential to ensure their vitality. Only a serious family matter would have (3) as an instigation for such a departure.
We arrived home three weeks later (4) to witness an incredible transformation (5) upon our return. Not only had the broccoli stalks and scarlet radishes come to bear fruit, but (6) they are the local deer population had decided to make a meal of our freshly sprouted crop. Deer do not use a freshly sharpened kitchen knife to remove delicious morsels from their stems. Rather, the animals gnaw and shred at the plants with their vegetarian teeth, leaving a mess of rejected foliage, hoof prints, and raw vegetable soup. (7)
Our four-foot twig garden fence suddenly appeared comical and (8) humorously purely decorative. There was obviously a lack of real (9) deterring qualities, that needed to be remedied quickly. Even though we were now back home to stand guard, our absence had inadvertently established our kitchen garden as a food plot for the nearby wildlife. Deer are typically night eaters, and we weren’t about to change our own sleeping patterns to accommodate them! Stopping the deer would (10) require a concerted, multi-pronged approach.
(11) Following a tedious journey to the local hardware store, we assembled our army’s ammunition: 350 feet of chicken wire; a box of four-inch screws; neon-orange plastic ribbon; and a heavy duty staple gun. Unrolling a 350-foot roll of chicken wire is no easy task. Constructing the bottom tier of the fence was (12) just as daunting; one person unrolled the four-foot wide tube while another person followed behind, stapling the chicken wire to the existing fence posts. Tackling the second row was another story altogether. Since our original posts were a mere four feet high, each post needed a four-foot extension attached to it, followed by another round of chicken wire.
After hours of back-breaking work, we stood back to admire (13) this new fence. The big test would come when darkness fell. Deer can and will leap over an eight-foot barrier if necessary, but our saving grace would be the intimidation factor of our new fence, with its metallic outline glinting in the moonlight and neon-orange tags flapping in the wind. (14) Swift and beautiful leapers, the newness and appearance of the enclosure should nonetheless serve to frighten away our backyard deer.
It has been two months since the transformation of our little twig-fenced garden into a chicken-wired vegetable prison. Each night we sit down (15) to the likes of delicious sweet corn, baked zucchini, tomato and cucumber salad, and snap beans. No broccoli or radishes this year, but we’re already discussing the blueberry bushes and strawberry plants for next year. First, though, we will give some serious thought to the black bears that live in our woods.

Q. (12) Which of the following alternatives to the underlined portion would NOT be acceptable?

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
The Deer Fence
A family emergency took us across the country for several weeks during the spring of (1) that year. We had left our first vegetable garden in the midst of early growing season, a time when (2) careful monitoring of emerging seeds is essential to ensure their vitality. Only a serious family matter would have (3) as an instigation for such a departure.
We arrived home three weeks later (4) to witness an incredible transformation (5) upon our return. Not only had the broccoli stalks and scarlet radishes come to bear fruit, but (6) they are the local deer population had decided to make a meal of our freshly sprouted crop. Deer do not use a freshly sharpened kitchen knife to remove delicious morsels from their stems. Rather, the animals gnaw and shred at the plants with their vegetarian teeth, leaving a mess of rejected foliage, hoof prints, and raw vegetable soup. (7)
Our four-foot twig garden fence suddenly appeared comical and (8) humorously purely decorative. There was obviously a lack of real (9) deterring qualities, that needed to be remedied quickly. Even though we were now back home to stand guard, our absence had inadvertently established our kitchen garden as a food plot for the nearby wildlife. Deer are typically night eaters, and we weren’t about to change our own sleeping patterns to accommodate them! Stopping the deer would (10) require a concerted, multi-pronged approach.
(11) Following a tedious journey to the local hardware store, we assembled our army’s ammunition: 350 feet of chicken wire; a box of four-inch screws; neon-orange plastic ribbon; and a heavy duty staple gun. Unrolling a 350-foot roll of chicken wire is no easy task. Constructing the bottom tier of the fence was (12) just as daunting; one person unrolled the four-foot wide tube while another person followed behind, stapling the chicken wire to the existing fence posts. Tackling the second row was another story altogether. Since our original posts were a mere four feet high, each post needed a four-foot extension attached to it, followed by another round of chicken wire.
After hours of back-breaking work, we stood back to admire (13) this new fence. The big test would come when darkness fell. Deer can and will leap over an eight-foot barrier if necessary, but our saving grace would be the intimidation factor of our new fence, with its metallic outline glinting in the moonlight and neon-orange tags flapping in the wind. (14) Swift and beautiful leapers, the newness and appearance of the enclosure should nonetheless serve to frighten away our backyard deer.
It has been two months since the transformation of our little twig-fenced garden into a chicken-wired vegetable prison. Each night we sit down (15) to the likes of delicious sweet corn, baked zucchini, tomato and cucumber salad, and snap beans. No broccoli or radishes this year, but we’re already discussing the blueberry bushes and strawberry plants for next year. First, though, we will give some serious thought to the black bears that live in our woods.

Q. (13) Given that all the choices are true, which one provides the most specific detail and maintains the style and tone of the essay?

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
The Deer Fence
A family emergency took us across the country for several weeks during the spring of (1) that year. We had left our first vegetable garden in the midst of early growing season, a time when (2) careful monitoring of emerging seeds is essential to ensure their vitality. Only a serious family matter would have (3) as an instigation for such a departure.
We arrived home three weeks later (4) to witness an incredible transformation (5) upon our return. Not only had the broccoli stalks and scarlet radishes come to bear fruit, but (6) they are the local deer population had decided to make a meal of our freshly sprouted crop. Deer do not use a freshly sharpened kitchen knife to remove delicious morsels from their stems. Rather, the animals gnaw and shred at the plants with their vegetarian teeth, leaving a mess of rejected foliage, hoof prints, and raw vegetable soup. (7)
Our four-foot twig garden fence suddenly appeared comical and (8) humorously purely decorative. There was obviously a lack of real (9) deterring qualities, that needed to be remedied quickly. Even though we were now back home to stand guard, our absence had inadvertently established our kitchen garden as a food plot for the nearby wildlife. Deer are typically night eaters, and we weren’t about to change our own sleeping patterns to accommodate them! Stopping the deer would (10) require a concerted, multi-pronged approach.
(11) Following a tedious journey to the local hardware store, we assembled our army’s ammunition: 350 feet of chicken wire; a box of four-inch screws; neon-orange plastic ribbon; and a heavy duty staple gun. Unrolling a 350-foot roll of chicken wire is no easy task. Constructing the bottom tier of the fence was (12) just as daunting; one person unrolled the four-foot wide tube while another person followed behind, stapling the chicken wire to the existing fence posts. Tackling the second row was another story altogether. Since our original posts were a mere four feet high, each post needed a four-foot extension attached to it, followed by another round of chicken wire.
After hours of back-breaking work, we stood back to admire (13) this new fence. The big test would come when darkness fell. Deer can and will leap over an eight-foot barrier if necessary, but our saving grace would be the intimidation factor of our new fence, with its metallic outline glinting in the moonlight and neon-orange tags flapping in the wind. (14) Swift and beautiful leapers, the newness and appearance of the enclosure should nonetheless serve to frighten away our backyard deer.
It has been two months since the transformation of our little twig-fenced garden into a chicken-wired vegetable prison. Each night we sit down (15) to the likes of delicious sweet corn, baked zucchini, tomato and cucumber salad, and snap beans. No broccoli or radishes this year, but we’re already discussing the blueberry bushes and strawberry plants for next year. First, though, we will give some serious thought to the black bears that live in our woods.

Q. (14) 

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
The Deer Fence
A family emergency took us across the country for several weeks during the spring of (1) that year. We had left our first vegetable garden in the midst of early growing season, a time when (2) careful monitoring of emerging seeds is essential to ensure their vitality. Only a serious family matter would have (3) as an instigation for such a departure.
We arrived home three weeks later (4) to witness an incredible transformation (5) upon our return. Not only had the broccoli stalks and scarlet radishes come to bear fruit, but (6) they are the local deer population had decided to make a meal of our freshly sprouted crop. Deer do not use a freshly sharpened kitchen knife to remove delicious morsels from their stems. Rather, the animals gnaw and shred at the plants with their vegetarian teeth, leaving a mess of rejected foliage, hoof prints, and raw vegetable soup. (7)
Our four-foot twig garden fence suddenly appeared comical and (8) humorously purely decorative. There was obviously a lack of real (9) deterring qualities, that needed to be remedied quickly. Even though we were now back home to stand guard, our absence had inadvertently established our kitchen garden as a food plot for the nearby wildlife. Deer are typically night eaters, and we weren’t about to change our own sleeping patterns to accommodate them! Stopping the deer would (10) require a concerted, multi-pronged approach.
(11) Following a tedious journey to the local hardware store, we assembled our army’s ammunition: 350 feet of chicken wire; a box of four-inch screws; neon-orange plastic ribbon; and a heavy duty staple gun. Unrolling a 350-foot roll of chicken wire is no easy task. Constructing the bottom tier of the fence was (12) just as daunting; one person unrolled the four-foot wide tube while another person followed behind, stapling the chicken wire to the existing fence posts. Tackling the second row was another story altogether. Since our original posts were a mere four feet high, each post needed a four-foot extension attached to it, followed by another round of chicken wire.
After hours of back-breaking work, we stood back to admire (13) this new fence. The big test would come when darkness fell. Deer can and will leap over an eight-foot barrier if necessary, but our saving grace would be the intimidation factor of our new fence, with its metallic outline glinting in the moonlight and neon-orange tags flapping in the wind. (14) Swift and beautiful leapers, the newness and appearance of the enclosure should nonetheless serve to frighten away our backyard deer.
It has been two months since the transformation of our little twig-fenced garden into a chicken-wired vegetable prison. Each night we sit down (15) to the likes of delicious sweet corn, baked zucchini, tomato and cucumber salad, and snap beans. No broccoli or radishes this year, but we’re already discussing the blueberry bushes and strawberry plants for next year. First, though, we will give some serious thought to the black bears that live in our woods.

Q. (15) 

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
A Flute in the Forest
A quiet walk along a forest path during an early spring dusk (1) surprisingly revealed an unexpected gift of nature. The sound of a flute seemed to float from the tallest trees in the near distance. This flute song was like none ever made by man. Our guide quickly raised his hand in a signal for us to stop and remain still, and then whispered these simple words: “Wood Thrush.” (2) Truly, any attempts to describe this spectacular birdsong with words does a grave injustice to its unique vocalizations.
The Wood Thrush is a rather plain, brown, robin-like bird. Its most distinctive features are its white spotted chest and pinkish legs. Viewing these birds can be especially (3) difficult, as they enjoy perching on the tallest branch that is still able to offer seclusion among its leaves and twigs. Binoculars are a must. With each Wood Thrush song, a birdwatcher is able to track the bird’s location. Because it is a migratory bird, early spring is generally the first opportunity to observe the Wood Thrush in the United States. (4) A mixed forest is its preferred habitat, one with both deciduous and evergreen trees of varying heights. Interestingly, while the Wood Thrush enjoys singing from the tallest branches, (5) it’s nest is often found much closer to the ground.
1. (6) As the birds settle into their spring nesting areas, the race to find a mate starts in earnest.
2. Fortunately for bird lovers, this is when the male Wood Thrush begins perfecting his song as he attempts to attract a willing female.
3. Starting in the late evening, just as dusk begins to encompass the landscape and most other birds have quieted down, the Wood Thrush tentatively begins his symphony of love.
4. (7) His songs come in distinct parts, and he can sometimes even sing two sweet notes simultaneously.
5. His concert generally lasts for a full half hour, and he completes more than 100 songs in that time.
6. With each song, the listener (8) begins to hear this fancy flutist working on new combinations of notes, extending a particular collection of chords, and changing pitch and volume at will.
7. Abruptly, the singing stops, (9) indicating that the bird’s pure exhaustion. (10)
(11) Following a long rest, the male Wood Thrush awakens to begin his quest a new. Early in the morning, before the other forest birds awaken, the Wood Thrush (12) by starting his melody all over again, waking the world up to another long and (13) harmonious musical arrangement. It seems unimaginable that more than one such display is necessary to attract an interested partner, but the songs continue for the entire spring and even into the summer months. One can only determine that the Wood (14) Thrush chosen female and subsequent offspring are begging him (15) for to keep singing. As poet Henry David Thoreau wrote, the Wood Thrush “alone declares the immortal wealth and vigor that is in this forest.”

Q. (1)

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
A Flute in the Forest
A quiet walk along a forest path during an early spring dusk (1) surprisingly revealed an unexpected gift of nature. The sound of a flute seemed to float from the tallest trees in the near distance. This flute song was like none ever made by man. Our guide quickly raised his hand in a signal for us to stop and remain still, and then whispered these simple words: “Wood Thrush.” (2) Truly, any attempts to describe this spectacular birdsong with words does a grave injustice to its unique vocalizations.
The Wood Thrush is a rather plain, brown, robin-like bird. Its most distinctive features are its white spotted chest and pinkish legs. Viewing these birds can be especially (3) difficult, as they enjoy perching on the tallest branch that is still able to offer seclusion among its leaves and twigs. Binoculars are a must. With each Wood Thrush song, a birdwatcher is able to track the bird’s location. Because it is a migratory bird, early spring is generally the first opportunity to observe the Wood Thrush in the United States. (4) A mixed forest is its preferred habitat, one with both deciduous and evergreen trees of varying heights. Interestingly, while the Wood Thrush enjoys singing from the tallest branches, (5) it’s nest is often found much closer to the ground.
1. (6) As the birds settle into their spring nesting areas, the race to find a mate starts in earnest.
2. Fortunately for bird lovers, this is when the male Wood Thrush begins perfecting his song as he attempts to attract a willing female.
3. Starting in the late evening, just as dusk begins to encompass the landscape and most other birds have quieted down, the Wood Thrush tentatively begins his symphony of love.
4. (7) His songs come in distinct parts, and he can sometimes even sing two sweet notes simultaneously.
5. His concert generally lasts for a full half hour, and he completes more than 100 songs in that time.
6. With each song, the listener (8) begins to hear this fancy flutist working on new combinations of notes, extending a particular collection of chords, and changing pitch and volume at will.
7. Abruptly, the singing stops, (9) indicating that the bird’s pure exhaustion. (10)
(11) Following a long rest, the male Wood Thrush awakens to begin his quest a new. Early in the morning, before the other forest birds awaken, the Wood Thrush (12) by starting his melody all over again, waking the world up to another long and (13) harmonious musical arrangement. It seems unimaginable that more than one such display is necessary to attract an interested partner, but the songs continue for the entire spring and even into the summer months. One can only determine that the Wood (14) Thrush chosen female and subsequent offspring are begging him (15) for to keep singing. As poet Henry David Thoreau wrote, the Wood Thrush “alone declares the immortal wealth and vigor that is in this forest.”

Q. (2) Which of the following alternatives to the underlined portion would NOT be acceptable?

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
A Flute in the Forest
A quiet walk along a forest path during an early spring dusk (1) surprisingly revealed an unexpected gift of nature. The sound of a flute seemed to float from the tallest trees in the near distance. This flute song was like none ever made by man. Our guide quickly raised his hand in a signal for us to stop and remain still, and then whispered these simple words: “Wood Thrush.” (2) Truly, any attempts to describe this spectacular birdsong with words does a grave injustice to its unique vocalizations.
The Wood Thrush is a rather plain, brown, robin-like bird. Its most distinctive features are its white spotted chest and pinkish legs. Viewing these birds can be especially (3) difficult, as they enjoy perching on the tallest branch that is still able to offer seclusion among its leaves and twigs. Binoculars are a must. With each Wood Thrush song, a birdwatcher is able to track the bird’s location. Because it is a migratory bird, early spring is generally the first opportunity to observe the Wood Thrush in the United States. (4) A mixed forest is its preferred habitat, one with both deciduous and evergreen trees of varying heights. Interestingly, while the Wood Thrush enjoys singing from the tallest branches, (5) it’s nest is often found much closer to the ground.
1. (6) As the birds settle into their spring nesting areas, the race to find a mate starts in earnest.
2. Fortunately for bird lovers, this is when the male Wood Thrush begins perfecting his song as he attempts to attract a willing female.
3. Starting in the late evening, just as dusk begins to encompass the landscape and most other birds have quieted down, the Wood Thrush tentatively begins his symphony of love.
4. (7) His songs come in distinct parts, and he can sometimes even sing two sweet notes simultaneously.
5. His concert generally lasts for a full half hour, and he completes more than 100 songs in that time.
6. With each song, the listener (8) begins to hear this fancy flutist working on new combinations of notes, extending a particular collection of chords, and changing pitch and volume at will.
7. Abruptly, the singing stops, (9) indicating that the bird’s pure exhaustion. (10)
(11) Following a long rest, the male Wood Thrush awakens to begin his quest a new. Early in the morning, before the other forest birds awaken, the Wood Thrush (12) by starting his melody all over again, waking the world up to another long and (13) harmonious musical arrangement. It seems unimaginable that more than one such display is necessary to attract an interested partner, but the songs continue for the entire spring and even into the summer months. One can only determine that the Wood (14) Thrush chosen female and subsequent offspring are begging him (15) for to keep singing. As poet Henry David Thoreau wrote, the Wood Thrush “alone declares the immortal wealth and vigor that is in this forest.”

Q. (3)

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
A Flute in the Forest
A quiet walk along a forest path during an early spring dusk (1) surprisingly revealed an unexpected gift of nature. The sound of a flute seemed to float from the tallest trees in the near distance. This flute song was like none ever made by man. Our guide quickly raised his hand in a signal for us to stop and remain still, and then whispered these simple words: “Wood Thrush.” (2) Truly, any attempts to describe this spectacular birdsong with words does a grave injustice to its unique vocalizations.
The Wood Thrush is a rather plain, brown, robin-like bird. Its most distinctive features are its white spotted chest and pinkish legs. Viewing these birds can be especially (3) difficult, as they enjoy perching on the tallest branch that is still able to offer seclusion among its leaves and twigs. Binoculars are a must. With each Wood Thrush song, a birdwatcher is able to track the bird’s location. Because it is a migratory bird, early spring is generally the first opportunity to observe the Wood Thrush in the United States. (4) A mixed forest is its preferred habitat, one with both deciduous and evergreen trees of varying heights. Interestingly, while the Wood Thrush enjoys singing from the tallest branches, (5) it’s nest is often found much closer to the ground.
1. (6) As the birds settle into their spring nesting areas, the race to find a mate starts in earnest.
2. Fortunately for bird lovers, this is when the male Wood Thrush begins perfecting his song as he attempts to attract a willing female.
3. Starting in the late evening, just as dusk begins to encompass the landscape and most other birds have quieted down, the Wood Thrush tentatively begins his symphony of love.
4. (7) His songs come in distinct parts, and he can sometimes even sing two sweet notes simultaneously.
5. His concert generally lasts for a full half hour, and he completes more than 100 songs in that time.
6. With each song, the listener (8) begins to hear this fancy flutist working on new combinations of notes, extending a particular collection of chords, and changing pitch and volume at will.
7. Abruptly, the singing stops, (9) indicating that the bird’s pure exhaustion. (10)
(11) Following a long rest, the male Wood Thrush awakens to begin his quest a new. Early in the morning, before the other forest birds awaken, the Wood Thrush (12) by starting his melody all over again, waking the world up to another long and (13) harmonious musical arrangement. It seems unimaginable that more than one such display is necessary to attract an interested partner, but the songs continue for the entire spring and even into the summer months. One can only determine that the Wood (14) Thrush chosen female and subsequent offspring are begging him (15) for to keep singing. As poet Henry David Thoreau wrote, the Wood Thrush “alone declares the immortal wealth and vigor that is in this forest.”

Q. (4) The writer is considering deleting the first part of the preceding sentence, so that the sentence would read:
Early spring is generally the first opportunity to observe the Wood Thrush in the United States.
If the writer were to make this change, the essay would primarily lose:

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
A Flute in the Forest
A quiet walk along a forest path during an early spring dusk (1) surprisingly revealed an unexpected gift of nature. The sound of a flute seemed to float from the tallest trees in the near distance. This flute song was like none ever made by man. Our guide quickly raised his hand in a signal for us to stop and remain still, and then whispered these simple words: “Wood Thrush.” (2) Truly, any attempts to describe this spectacular birdsong with words does a grave injustice to its unique vocalizations.
The Wood Thrush is a rather plain, brown, robin-like bird. Its most distinctive features are its white spotted chest and pinkish legs. Viewing these birds can be especially (3) difficult, as they enjoy perching on the tallest branch that is still able to offer seclusion among its leaves and twigs. Binoculars are a must. With each Wood Thrush song, a birdwatcher is able to track the bird’s location. Because it is a migratory bird, early spring is generally the first opportunity to observe the Wood Thrush in the United States. (4) A mixed forest is its preferred habitat, one with both deciduous and evergreen trees of varying heights. Interestingly, while the Wood Thrush enjoys singing from the tallest branches, (5) it’s nest is often found much closer to the ground.
1. (6) As the birds settle into their spring nesting areas, the race to find a mate starts in earnest.
2. Fortunately for bird lovers, this is when the male Wood Thrush begins perfecting his song as he attempts to attract a willing female.
3. Starting in the late evening, just as dusk begins to encompass the landscape and most other birds have quieted down, the Wood Thrush tentatively begins his symphony of love.
4. (7) His songs come in distinct parts, and he can sometimes even sing two sweet notes simultaneously.
5. His concert generally lasts for a full half hour, and he completes more than 100 songs in that time.
6. With each song, the listener (8) begins to hear this fancy flutist working on new combinations of notes, extending a particular collection of chords, and changing pitch and volume at will.
7. Abruptly, the singing stops, (9) indicating that the bird’s pure exhaustion. (10)
(11) Following a long rest, the male Wood Thrush awakens to begin his quest a new. Early in the morning, before the other forest birds awaken, the Wood Thrush (12) by starting his melody all over again, waking the world up to another long and (13) harmonious musical arrangement. It seems unimaginable that more than one such display is necessary to attract an interested partner, but the songs continue for the entire spring and even into the summer months. One can only determine that the Wood (14) Thrush chosen female and subsequent offspring are begging him (15) for to keep singing. As poet Henry David Thoreau wrote, the Wood Thrush “alone declares the immortal wealth and vigor that is in this forest.”

Q. (5)

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
A Flute in the Forest
A quiet walk along a forest path during an early spring dusk (1) surprisingly revealed an unexpected gift of nature. The sound of a flute seemed to float from the tallest trees in the near distance. This flute song was like none ever made by man. Our guide quickly raised his hand in a signal for us to stop and remain still, and then whispered these simple words: “Wood Thrush.” (2) Truly, any attempts to describe this spectacular birdsong with words does a grave injustice to its unique vocalizations.
The Wood Thrush is a rather plain, brown, robin-like bird. Its most distinctive features are its white spotted chest and pinkish legs. Viewing these birds can be especially (3) difficult, as they enjoy perching on the tallest branch that is still able to offer seclusion among its leaves and twigs. Binoculars are a must. With each Wood Thrush song, a birdwatcher is able to track the bird’s location. Because it is a migratory bird, early spring is generally the first opportunity to observe the Wood Thrush in the United States. (4) A mixed forest is its preferred habitat, one with both deciduous and evergreen trees of varying heights. Interestingly, while the Wood Thrush enjoys singing from the tallest branches, (5) it’s nest is often found much closer to the ground.
1. (6) As the birds settle into their spring nesting areas, the race to find a mate starts in earnest.
2. Fortunately for bird lovers, this is when the male Wood Thrush begins perfecting his song as he attempts to attract a willing female.
3. Starting in the late evening, just as dusk begins to encompass the landscape and most other birds have quieted down, the Wood Thrush tentatively begins his symphony of love.
4. (7) His songs come in distinct parts, and he can sometimes even sing two sweet notes simultaneously.
5. His concert generally lasts for a full half hour, and he completes more than 100 songs in that time.
6. With each song, the listener (8) begins to hear this fancy flutist working on new combinations of notes, extending a particular collection of chords, and changing pitch and volume at will.
7. Abruptly, the singing stops, (9) indicating that the bird’s pure exhaustion. (10)
(11) Following a long rest, the male Wood Thrush awakens to begin his quest a new. Early in the morning, before the other forest birds awaken, the Wood Thrush (12) by starting his melody all over again, waking the world up to another long and (13) harmonious musical arrangement. It seems unimaginable that more than one such display is necessary to attract an interested partner, but the songs continue for the entire spring and even into the summer months. One can only determine that the Wood (14) Thrush chosen female and subsequent offspring are begging him (15) for to keep singing. As poet Henry David Thoreau wrote, the Wood Thrush “alone declares the immortal wealth and vigor that is in this forest.”

Q. (6) Which of the following alternatives to the underlined portion would NOT be acceptable?

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
A Flute in the Forest
A quiet walk along a forest path during an early spring dusk (1) surprisingly revealed an unexpected gift of nature. The sound of a flute seemed to float from the tallest trees in the near distance. This flute song was like none ever made by man. Our guide quickly raised his hand in a signal for us to stop and remain still, and then whispered these simple words: “Wood Thrush.” (2) Truly, any attempts to describe this spectacular birdsong with words does a grave injustice to its unique vocalizations.
The Wood Thrush is a rather plain, brown, robin-like bird. Its most distinctive features are its white spotted chest and pinkish legs. Viewing these birds can be especially (3) difficult, as they enjoy perching on the tallest branch that is still able to offer seclusion among its leaves and twigs. Binoculars are a must. With each Wood Thrush song, a birdwatcher is able to track the bird’s location. Because it is a migratory bird, early spring is generally the first opportunity to observe the Wood Thrush in the United States. (4) A mixed forest is its preferred habitat, one with both deciduous and evergreen trees of varying heights. Interestingly, while the Wood Thrush enjoys singing from the tallest branches, (5) it’s nest is often found much closer to the ground.
1. (6) As the birds settle into their spring nesting areas, the race to find a mate starts in earnest.
2. Fortunately for bird lovers, this is when the male Wood Thrush begins perfecting his song as he attempts to attract a willing female.
3. Starting in the late evening, just as dusk begins to encompass the landscape and most other birds have quieted down, the Wood Thrush tentatively begins his symphony of love.
4. (7) His songs come in distinct parts, and he can sometimes even sing two sweet notes simultaneously.
5. His concert generally lasts for a full half hour, and he completes more than 100 songs in that time.
6. With each song, the listener (8) begins to hear this fancy flutist working on new combinations of notes, extending a particular collection of chords, and changing pitch and volume at will.
7. Abruptly, the singing stops, (9) indicating that the bird’s pure exhaustion. (10)
(11) Following a long rest, the male Wood Thrush awakens to begin his quest a new. Early in the morning, before the other forest birds awaken, the Wood Thrush (12) by starting his melody all over again, waking the world up to another long and (13) harmonious musical arrangement. It seems unimaginable that more than one such display is necessary to attract an interested partner, but the songs continue for the entire spring and even into the summer months. One can only determine that the Wood (14) Thrush chosen female and subsequent offspring are begging him (15) for to keep singing. As poet Henry David Thoreau wrote, the Wood Thrush “alone declares the immortal wealth and vigor that is in this forest.”

Q. (7)

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
A Flute in the Forest
A quiet walk along a forest path during an early spring dusk (1) surprisingly revealed an unexpected gift of nature. The sound of a flute seemed to float from the tallest trees in the near distance. This flute song was like none ever made by man. Our guide quickly raised his hand in a signal for us to stop and remain still, and then whispered these simple words: “Wood Thrush.” (2) Truly, any attempts to describe this spectacular birdsong with words does a grave injustice to its unique vocalizations.
The Wood Thrush is a rather plain, brown, robin-like bird. Its most distinctive features are its white spotted chest and pinkish legs. Viewing these birds can be especially (3) difficult, as they enjoy perching on the tallest branch that is still able to offer seclusion among its leaves and twigs. Binoculars are a must. With each Wood Thrush song, a birdwatcher is able to track the bird’s location. Because it is a migratory bird, early spring is generally the first opportunity to observe the Wood Thrush in the United States. (4) A mixed forest is its preferred habitat, one with both deciduous and evergreen trees of varying heights. Interestingly, while the Wood Thrush enjoys singing from the tallest branches, (5) it’s nest is often found much closer to the ground.
1. (6) As the birds settle into their spring nesting areas, the race to find a mate starts in earnest.
2. Fortunately for bird lovers, this is when the male Wood Thrush begins perfecting his song as he attempts to attract a willing female.
3. Starting in the late evening, just as dusk begins to encompass the landscape and most other birds have quieted down, the Wood Thrush tentatively begins his symphony of love.
4. (7) His songs come in distinct parts, and he can sometimes even sing two sweet notes simultaneously.
5. His concert generally lasts for a full half hour, and he completes more than 100 songs in that time.
6. With each song, the listener (8) begins to hear this fancy flutist working on new combinations of notes, extending a particular collection of chords, and changing pitch and volume at will.
7. Abruptly, the singing stops, (9) indicating that the bird’s pure exhaustion. (10)
(11) Following a long rest, the male Wood Thrush awakens to begin his quest a new. Early in the morning, before the other forest birds awaken, the Wood Thrush (12) by starting his melody all over again, waking the world up to another long and (13) harmonious musical arrangement. It seems unimaginable that more than one such display is necessary to attract an interested partner, but the songs continue for the entire spring and even into the summer months. One can only determine that the Wood (14) Thrush chosen female and subsequent offspring are begging him (15) for to keep singing. As poet Henry David Thoreau wrote, the Wood Thrush “alone declares the immortal wealth and vigor that is in this forest.”

Q. (8) Which of the following alternatives to the underlined portion would NOT be acceptable?

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
A Flute in the Forest
A quiet walk along a forest path during an early spring dusk (1) surprisingly revealed an unexpected gift of nature. The sound of a flute seemed to float from the tallest trees in the near distance. This flute song was like none ever made by man. Our guide quickly raised his hand in a signal for us to stop and remain still, and then whispered these simple words: “Wood Thrush.” (2) Truly, any attempts to describe this spectacular birdsong with words does a grave injustice to its unique vocalizations.
The Wood Thrush is a rather plain, brown, robin-like bird. Its most distinctive features are its white spotted chest and pinkish legs. Viewing these birds can be especially (3) difficult, as they enjoy perching on the tallest branch that is still able to offer seclusion among its leaves and twigs. Binoculars are a must. With each Wood Thrush song, a birdwatcher is able to track the bird’s location. Because it is a migratory bird, early spring is generally the first opportunity to observe the Wood Thrush in the United States. (4) A mixed forest is its preferred habitat, one with both deciduous and evergreen trees of varying heights. Interestingly, while the Wood Thrush enjoys singing from the tallest branches, (5) it’s nest is often found much closer to the ground.
1. (6) As the birds settle into their spring nesting areas, the race to find a mate starts in earnest.
2. Fortunately for bird lovers, this is when the male Wood Thrush begins perfecting his song as he attempts to attract a willing female.
3. Starting in the late evening, just as dusk begins to encompass the landscape and most other birds have quieted down, the Wood Thrush tentatively begins his symphony of love.
4. (7) His songs come in distinct parts, and he can sometimes even sing two sweet notes simultaneously.
5. His concert generally lasts for a full half hour, and he completes more than 100 songs in that time.
6. With each song, the listener (8) begins to hear this fancy flutist working on new combinations of notes, extending a particular collection of chords, and changing pitch and volume at will.
7. Abruptly, the singing stops, (9) indicating that the bird’s pure exhaustion. (10)
(11) Following a long rest, the male Wood Thrush awakens to begin his quest a new. Early in the morning, before the other forest birds awaken, the Wood Thrush (12) by starting his melody all over again, waking the world up to another long and (13) harmonious musical arrangement. It seems unimaginable that more than one such display is necessary to attract an interested partner, but the songs continue for the entire spring and even into the summer months. One can only determine that the Wood (14) Thrush chosen female and subsequent offspring are begging him (15) for to keep singing. As poet Henry David Thoreau wrote, the Wood Thrush “alone declares the immortal wealth and vigor that is in this forest.”

Q. (9)

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
A Flute in the Forest
A quiet walk along a forest path during an early spring dusk (1) surprisingly revealed an unexpected gift of nature. The sound of a flute seemed to float from the tallest trees in the near distance. This flute song was like none ever made by man. Our guide quickly raised his hand in a signal for us to stop and remain still, and then whispered these simple words: “Wood Thrush.” (2) Truly, any attempts to describe this spectacular birdsong with words does a grave injustice to its unique vocalizations.
The Wood Thrush is a rather plain, brown, robin-like bird. Its most distinctive features are its white spotted chest and pinkish legs. Viewing these birds can be especially (3) difficult, as they enjoy perching on the tallest branch that is still able to offer seclusion among its leaves and twigs. Binoculars are a must. With each Wood Thrush song, a birdwatcher is able to track the bird’s location. Because it is a migratory bird, early spring is generally the first opportunity to observe the Wood Thrush in the United States. (4) A mixed forest is its preferred habitat, one with both deciduous and evergreen trees of varying heights. Interestingly, while the Wood Thrush enjoys singing from the tallest branches, (5) it’s nest is often found much closer to the ground.
1. (6) As the birds settle into their spring nesting areas, the race to find a mate starts in earnest.
2. Fortunately for bird lovers, this is when the male Wood Thrush begins perfecting his song as he attempts to attract a willing female.
3. Starting in the late evening, just as dusk begins to encompass the landscape and most other birds have quieted down, the Wood Thrush tentatively begins his symphony of love.
4. (7) His songs come in distinct parts, and he can sometimes even sing two sweet notes simultaneously.
5. His concert generally lasts for a full half hour, and he completes more than 100 songs in that time.
6. With each song, the listener (8) begins to hear this fancy flutist working on new combinations of notes, extending a particular collection of chords, and changing pitch and volume at will.
7. Abruptly, the singing stops, (9) indicating that the bird’s pure exhaustion. (10)
(11) Following a long rest, the male Wood Thrush awakens to begin his quest a new. Early in the morning, before the other forest birds awaken, the Wood Thrush (12) by starting his melody all over again, waking the world up to another long and (13) harmonious musical arrangement. It seems unimaginable that more than one such display is necessary to attract an interested partner, but the songs continue for the entire spring and even into the summer months. One can only determine that the Wood (14) Thrush chosen female and subsequent offspring are begging him (15) for to keep singing. As poet Henry David Thoreau wrote, the Wood Thrush “alone declares the immortal wealth and vigor that is in this forest.”

Q. (10) Upon reviewing this paragraph and realizing that some information has been left out, the writer composes the following sentence:
All of these songs play an important role in the male bird’s attempt to secure a mate, and the female Wood Thrush hears subtle nuances that escape the human ear.
This sentence should most logically be placed after Sentence:

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
A Flute in the Forest
A quiet walk along a forest path during an early spring dusk (1) surprisingly revealed an unexpected gift of nature. The sound of a flute seemed to float from the tallest trees in the near distance. This flute song was like none ever made by man. Our guide quickly raised his hand in a signal for us to stop and remain still, and then whispered these simple words: “Wood Thrush.” (2) Truly, any attempts to describe this spectacular birdsong with words does a grave injustice to its unique vocalizations.
The Wood Thrush is a rather plain, brown, robin-like bird. Its most distinctive features are its white spotted chest and pinkish legs. Viewing these birds can be especially (3) difficult, as they enjoy perching on the tallest branch that is still able to offer seclusion among its leaves and twigs. Binoculars are a must. With each Wood Thrush song, a birdwatcher is able to track the bird’s location. Because it is a migratory bird, early spring is generally the first opportunity to observe the Wood Thrush in the United States. (4) A mixed forest is its preferred habitat, one with both deciduous and evergreen trees of varying heights. Interestingly, while the Wood Thrush enjoys singing from the tallest branches, (5) it’s nest is often found much closer to the ground.
1. (6) As the birds settle into their spring nesting areas, the race to find a mate starts in earnest.
2. Fortunately for bird lovers, this is when the male Wood Thrush begins perfecting his song as he attempts to attract a willing female.
3. Starting in the late evening, just as dusk begins to encompass the landscape and most other birds have quieted down, the Wood Thrush tentatively begins his symphony of love.
4. (7) His songs come in distinct parts, and he can sometimes even sing two sweet notes simultaneously.
5. His concert generally lasts for a full half hour, and he completes more than 100 songs in that time.
6. With each song, the listener (8) begins to hear this fancy flutist working on new combinations of notes, extending a particular collection of chords, and changing pitch and volume at will.
7. Abruptly, the singing stops, (9) indicating that the bird’s pure exhaustion. (10)
(11) Following a long rest, the male Wood Thrush awakens to begin his quest a new. Early in the morning, before the other forest birds awaken, the Wood Thrush (12) by starting his melody all over again, waking the world up to another long and (13) harmonious musical arrangement. It seems unimaginable that more than one such display is necessary to attract an interested partner, but the songs continue for the entire spring and even into the summer months. One can only determine that the Wood (14) Thrush chosen female and subsequent offspring are begging him (15) for to keep singing. As poet Henry David Thoreau wrote, the Wood Thrush “alone declares the immortal wealth and vigor that is in this forest.”

Q. (11) Given that all the choices are true, which one most effectively introduces the information in this paragraph?

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
A Flute in the Forest
A quiet walk along a forest path during an early spring dusk (1) surprisingly revealed an unexpected gift of nature. The sound of a flute seemed to float from the tallest trees in the near distance. This flute song was like none ever made by man. Our guide quickly raised his hand in a signal for us to stop and remain still, and then whispered these simple words: “Wood Thrush.” (2) Truly, any attempts to describe this spectacular birdsong with words does a grave injustice to its unique vocalizations.
The Wood Thrush is a rather plain, brown, robin-like bird. Its most distinctive features are its white spotted chest and pinkish legs. Viewing these birds can be especially (3) difficult, as they enjoy perching on the tallest branch that is still able to offer seclusion among its leaves and twigs. Binoculars are a must. With each Wood Thrush song, a birdwatcher is able to track the bird’s location. Because it is a migratory bird, early spring is generally the first opportunity to observe the Wood Thrush in the United States. (4) A mixed forest is its preferred habitat, one with both deciduous and evergreen trees of varying heights. Interestingly, while the Wood Thrush enjoys singing from the tallest branches, (5) it’s nest is often found much closer to the ground.
1. (6) As the birds settle into their spring nesting areas, the race to find a mate starts in earnest.
2. Fortunately for bird lovers, this is when the male Wood Thrush begins perfecting his song as he attempts to attract a willing female.
3. Starting in the late evening, just as dusk begins to encompass the landscape and most other birds have quieted down, the Wood Thrush tentatively begins his symphony of love.
4. (7) His songs come in distinct parts, and he can sometimes even sing two sweet notes simultaneously.
5. His concert generally lasts for a full half hour, and he completes more than 100 songs in that time.
6. With each song, the listener (8) begins to hear this fancy flutist working on new combinations of notes, extending a particular collection of chords, and changing pitch and volume at will.
7. Abruptly, the singing stops, (9) indicating that the bird’s pure exhaustion. (10)
(11) Following a long rest, the male Wood Thrush awakens to begin his quest a new. Early in the morning, before the other forest birds awaken, the Wood Thrush (12) by starting his melody all over again, waking the world up to another long and (13) harmonious musical arrangement. It seems unimaginable that more than one such display is necessary to attract an interested partner, but the songs continue for the entire spring and even into the summer months. One can only determine that the Wood (14) Thrush chosen female and subsequent offspring are begging him (15) for to keep singing. As poet Henry David Thoreau wrote, the Wood Thrush “alone declares the immortal wealth and vigor that is in this forest.”

Q. (12)

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
A Flute in the Forest
A quiet walk along a forest path during an early spring dusk (1) surprisingly revealed an unexpected gift of nature. The sound of a flute seemed to float from the tallest trees in the near distance. This flute song was like none ever made by man. Our guide quickly raised his hand in a signal for us to stop and remain still, and then whispered these simple words: “Wood Thrush.” (2) Truly, any attempts to describe this spectacular birdsong with words does a grave injustice to its unique vocalizations.
The Wood Thrush is a rather plain, brown, robin-like bird. Its most distinctive features are its white spotted chest and pinkish legs. Viewing these birds can be especially (3) difficult, as they enjoy perching on the tallest branch that is still able to offer seclusion among its leaves and twigs. Binoculars are a must. With each Wood Thrush song, a birdwatcher is able to track the bird’s location. Because it is a migratory bird, early spring is generally the first opportunity to observe the Wood Thrush in the United States. (4) A mixed forest is its preferred habitat, one with both deciduous and evergreen trees of varying heights. Interestingly, while the Wood Thrush enjoys singing from the tallest branches, (5) it’s nest is often found much closer to the ground.
1. (6) As the birds settle into their spring nesting areas, the race to find a mate starts in earnest.
2. Fortunately for bird lovers, this is when the male Wood Thrush begins perfecting his song as he attempts to attract a willing female.
3. Starting in the late evening, just as dusk begins to encompass the landscape and most other birds have quieted down, the Wood Thrush tentatively begins his symphony of love.
4. (7) His songs come in distinct parts, and he can sometimes even sing two sweet notes simultaneously.
5. His concert generally lasts for a full half hour, and he completes more than 100 songs in that time.
6. With each song, the listener (8) begins to hear this fancy flutist working on new combinations of notes, extending a particular collection of chords, and changing pitch and volume at will.
7. Abruptly, the singing stops, (9) indicating that the bird’s pure exhaustion. (10)
(11) Following a long rest, the male Wood Thrush awakens to begin his quest a new. Early in the morning, before the other forest birds awaken, the Wood Thrush (12) by starting his melody all over again, waking the world up to another long and (13) harmonious musical arrangement. It seems unimaginable that more than one such display is necessary to attract an interested partner, but the songs continue for the entire spring and even into the summer months. One can only determine that the Wood (14) Thrush chosen female and subsequent offspring are begging him (15) for to keep singing. As poet Henry David Thoreau wrote, the Wood Thrush “alone declares the immortal wealth and vigor that is in this forest.”

Q. (13) Which choice provides the most specific and precise information?

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
A Flute in the Forest
A quiet walk along a forest path during an early spring dusk (1) surprisingly revealed an unexpected gift of nature. The sound of a flute seemed to float from the tallest trees in the near distance. This flute song was like none ever made by man. Our guide quickly raised his hand in a signal for us to stop and remain still, and then whispered these simple words: “Wood Thrush.” (2) Truly, any attempts to describe this spectacular birdsong with words does a grave injustice to its unique vocalizations.
The Wood Thrush is a rather plain, brown, robin-like bird. Its most distinctive features are its white spotted chest and pinkish legs. Viewing these birds can be especially (3) difficult, as they enjoy perching on the tallest branch that is still able to offer seclusion among its leaves and twigs. Binoculars are a must. With each Wood Thrush song, a birdwatcher is able to track the bird’s location. Because it is a migratory bird, early spring is generally the first opportunity to observe the Wood Thrush in the United States. (4) A mixed forest is its preferred habitat, one with both deciduous and evergreen trees of varying heights. Interestingly, while the Wood Thrush enjoys singing from the tallest branches, (5) it’s nest is often found much closer to the ground.
1. (6) As the birds settle into their spring nesting areas, the race to find a mate starts in earnest.
2. Fortunately for bird lovers, this is when the male Wood Thrush begins perfecting his song as he attempts to attract a willing female.
3. Starting in the late evening, just as dusk begins to encompass the landscape and most other birds have quieted down, the Wood Thrush tentatively begins his symphony of love.
4. (7) His songs come in distinct parts, and he can sometimes even sing two sweet notes simultaneously.
5. His concert generally lasts for a full half hour, and he completes more than 100 songs in that time.
6. With each song, the listener (8) begins to hear this fancy flutist working on new combinations of notes, extending a particular collection of chords, and changing pitch and volume at will.
7. Abruptly, the singing stops, (9) indicating that the bird’s pure exhaustion. (10)
(11) Following a long rest, the male Wood Thrush awakens to begin his quest a new. Early in the morning, before the other forest birds awaken, the Wood Thrush (12) by starting his melody all over again, waking the world up to another long and (13) harmonious musical arrangement. It seems unimaginable that more than one such display is necessary to attract an interested partner, but the songs continue for the entire spring and even into the summer months. One can only determine that the Wood (14) Thrush chosen female and subsequent offspring are begging him (15) for to keep singing. As poet Henry David Thoreau wrote, the Wood Thrush “alone declares the immortal wealth and vigor that is in this forest.”

Q. (14)

Directions: In the passages that follow, some words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the answer column, you will find alternatives for the words and phrases that are underlined. If you think that the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE,”. You will also find questions about a particular section of the passage, or about the entire passage. These questions will be identified either by an underlined portion or by a number in a box. Look for the answer that clearly expresses the idea, is consistent with the style and tone of the passage, and makes the correct use of standard written English. Read the passage through once before answering the questions. For some questions, you should read beyond the indicated portion before you answer.

Passage
A Flute in the Forest
A quiet walk along a forest path during an early spring dusk (1) surprisingly revealed an unexpected gift of nature. The sound of a flute seemed to float from the tallest trees in the near distance. This flute song was like none ever made by man. Our guide quickly raised his hand in a signal for us to stop and remain still, and then whispered these simple words: “Wood Thrush.” (2) Truly, any attempts to describe this spectacular birdsong with words does a grave injustice to its unique vocalizations.
The Wood Thrush is a rather plain, brown, robin-like bird. Its most distinctive features are its white spotted chest and pinkish legs. Viewing these birds can be especially (3) difficult, as they enjoy perching on the tallest branch that is still able to offer seclusion among its leaves and twigs. Binoculars are a must. With each Wood Thrush song, a birdwatcher is able to track the bird’s location. Because it is a migratory bird, early spring is generally the first opportunity to observe the Wood Thrush in the United States. (4) A mixed forest is its preferred habitat, one with both deciduous and evergreen trees of varying heights. Interestingly, while the Wood Thrush enjoys singing from the tallest branches, (5) it’s nest is often found much closer to the ground.
1. (6) As the birds settle into their spring nesting areas, the race to find a mate starts in earnest.
2. Fortunately for bird lovers, this is when the male Wood Thrush begins perfecting his song as he attempts to attract a willing female.
3. Starting in the late evening, just as dusk begins to encompass the landscape and most other birds have quieted down, the Wood Thrush tentatively begins his symphony of love.
4. (7) His songs come in distinct parts, and he can sometimes even sing two sweet notes simultaneously.
5. His concert generally lasts for a full half hour, and he completes more than 100 songs in that time.
6. With each song, the listener (8) begins to hear this fancy flutist working on new combinations of notes, extending a particular collection of chords, and changing pitch and volume at will.
7. Abruptly, the singing stops, (9) indicating that the bird’s pure exhaustion. (10)
(11) Following a long rest, the male Wood Thrush awakens to begin his quest a new. Early in the morning, before the other forest birds awaken, the Wood Thrush (12) by starting his melody all over again, waking the world up to another long and (13) harmonious musical arrangement. It seems unimaginable that more than one such display is necessary to attract an interested partner, but the songs continue for the entire spring and even into the summer months. One can only determine that the Wood (14) Thrush chosen female and subsequent offspring are begging him (15) for to keep singing. As poet Henry David Thoreau wrote, the Wood Thrush “alone declares the immortal wealth and vigor that is in this forest.”

Q. (15)