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4. Essay-writing
Most of us find it difficult to begin writing. We can make this easier
by thinking about the topic either through brainstorming, that is
with several people in a group giving their ideas as they strike them,
or by putting them down on a sheet of paper as they occur to us.
For example, if the topic is ‘Hobbies’, we can draw a circle and write
‘hobbies’ in it:
Hollies
Then we can put down our thoughts as they come to us in a random
manner as shown below.
Having done that we select the points and expand each into a sentence.
1. Hobbies are free-time activities. Examples are stamp-collecting,
painting etc.
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4. Essay-writing
Most of us find it difficult to begin writing. We can make this easier
by thinking about the topic either through brainstorming, that is
with several people in a group giving their ideas as they strike them,
or by putting them down on a sheet of paper as they occur to us.
For example, if the topic is ‘Hobbies’, we can draw a circle and write
‘hobbies’ in it:
Hollies
Then we can put down our thoughts as they come to us in a random
manner as shown below.
Having done that we select the points and expand each into a sentence.
1. Hobbies are free-time activities. Examples are stamp-collecting,
painting etc.
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2. They are matters of personal choice, not forced.
3. They are interesting and give pleasure.
4. They refresh the mind by providing an opportunity to do different
kinds of activities.
5. They provide relief from monotony.
6. They help us channelise our energy.
7. They can also be useful activities and can provide pleasure to
others. For example, reading out to visually impaired people,
visiting art exhibitions, music concerts etc.
8. Hobbies are educative and they widen our general knowledge.
9. They help us develop our overall personality.
10. They serve as a medium for the expression of our creativity.
11. We meet interesting people through our common interests and
develop friendships.
We usually begin a topic with a definition or short description. We could
begin thus:
Hobbies are activities that we engage in, in our free time. We
may be interested in needlework, drawing and painting or music.
Other common hobbies are stamp-collecting, clay-modelling,
solving crossword puzzles.
Although hobbies also entail work they are taken upon
through one’s own personal choice. They are not forced upon
us. They are activities that we are really interested in and hence
give us a great deal of pleasure.
Hobbies make life interesting. They refresh our minds
after a hard day’s work. We need to do something different
in order to do our routine work effectively. Hobbies provide
this variety.
Hobbies relieve us from the monotony of daily life. They fill
us with enthusiasm for work and keep our energy levels high.
We will go to any extent to get the things that we require, to get
the utmost joy from our hobbies.
Hobbies are also useful activities. Quite a few hobbies, like
stamp-collecting, widen our general knowledge about various
countries of the world. When we share common interests we
even get into correspondence with people of other countries.
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4. Essay-writing
Most of us find it difficult to begin writing. We can make this easier
by thinking about the topic either through brainstorming, that is
with several people in a group giving their ideas as they strike them,
or by putting them down on a sheet of paper as they occur to us.
For example, if the topic is ‘Hobbies’, we can draw a circle and write
‘hobbies’ in it:
Hollies
Then we can put down our thoughts as they come to us in a random
manner as shown below.
Having done that we select the points and expand each into a sentence.
1. Hobbies are free-time activities. Examples are stamp-collecting,
painting etc.
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2. They are matters of personal choice, not forced.
3. They are interesting and give pleasure.
4. They refresh the mind by providing an opportunity to do different
kinds of activities.
5. They provide relief from monotony.
6. They help us channelise our energy.
7. They can also be useful activities and can provide pleasure to
others. For example, reading out to visually impaired people,
visiting art exhibitions, music concerts etc.
8. Hobbies are educative and they widen our general knowledge.
9. They help us develop our overall personality.
10. They serve as a medium for the expression of our creativity.
11. We meet interesting people through our common interests and
develop friendships.
We usually begin a topic with a definition or short description. We could
begin thus:
Hobbies are activities that we engage in, in our free time. We
may be interested in needlework, drawing and painting or music.
Other common hobbies are stamp-collecting, clay-modelling,
solving crossword puzzles.
Although hobbies also entail work they are taken upon
through one’s own personal choice. They are not forced upon
us. They are activities that we are really interested in and hence
give us a great deal of pleasure.
Hobbies make life interesting. They refresh our minds
after a hard day’s work. We need to do something different
in order to do our routine work effectively. Hobbies provide
this variety.
Hobbies relieve us from the monotony of daily life. They fill
us with enthusiasm for work and keep our energy levels high.
We will go to any extent to get the things that we require, to get
the utmost joy from our hobbies.
Hobbies are also useful activities. Quite a few hobbies, like
stamp-collecting, widen our general knowledge about various
countries of the world. When we share common interests we
even get into correspondence with people of other countries.
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86 Hornbill This is how we write an essay.
A composition on a particular subject consisting of more than one
paragraph is an essay. The characteristics of a good essay are:
Unity : The essay should deal with the main subject, and all
parts of it should be clearly linked with that subject.
Coherence : There should be a logical sequence of thought. This
requires a logical relationship between ideas, sentences
and paragraphs.
Relevance : Unimportant information should not be included.
Proportion : Giving more space to the important ideas.
Read the following essay and the passage analysis that follows it
carefully.
The Importance of Games
1. “The Battle of Waterloo was won on the playing fields of Eton.” These
words have been attributed to the Duke of Wellington. Certainly
one does not play games in order to win battles; neither does the
curriculum include them for that reason. But the importance of
games in life should not be underestimated, for without them it is
harder for a person to be sound in body and mind.
2. For one thing, if a person is to fulfil all the duties that society
expects of him, it is important for him to keep healthy. He may be
very intelligent, but that has little meaning if he cannot make use
of his intelligence, because he is always suffering from bad health.
In some ways, the human body is like a machine. If it is not made
use of, it starts to work badly. People who are not fit grow weak and
become more susceptible to disease. Any form of game is useful,
provided it gives the body an opportunity to take regular physical
exercise.
3. Secondly, playing — and therefore experiencing winning
and losing — encourages the spirit of sportsmanship, thus
enabling one to deal with life’s problems in a wise and natural
manner. Games teach the truth embodied in the Olympic
motto: ‘The important thing in playing is not the winning or the
losing, but the participation’ — and, I may add, doing the best
one can.
4. We have to remember some other things about playing games,
however. First, it is the physical exercise that is important for
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4. Essay-writing
Most of us find it difficult to begin writing. We can make this easier
by thinking about the topic either through brainstorming, that is
with several people in a group giving their ideas as they strike them,
or by putting them down on a sheet of paper as they occur to us.
For example, if the topic is ‘Hobbies’, we can draw a circle and write
‘hobbies’ in it:
Hollies
Then we can put down our thoughts as they come to us in a random
manner as shown below.
Having done that we select the points and expand each into a sentence.
1. Hobbies are free-time activities. Examples are stamp-collecting,
painting etc.
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2. They are matters of personal choice, not forced.
3. They are interesting and give pleasure.
4. They refresh the mind by providing an opportunity to do different
kinds of activities.
5. They provide relief from monotony.
6. They help us channelise our energy.
7. They can also be useful activities and can provide pleasure to
others. For example, reading out to visually impaired people,
visiting art exhibitions, music concerts etc.
8. Hobbies are educative and they widen our general knowledge.
9. They help us develop our overall personality.
10. They serve as a medium for the expression of our creativity.
11. We meet interesting people through our common interests and
develop friendships.
We usually begin a topic with a definition or short description. We could
begin thus:
Hobbies are activities that we engage in, in our free time. We
may be interested in needlework, drawing and painting or music.
Other common hobbies are stamp-collecting, clay-modelling,
solving crossword puzzles.
Although hobbies also entail work they are taken upon
through one’s own personal choice. They are not forced upon
us. They are activities that we are really interested in and hence
give us a great deal of pleasure.
Hobbies make life interesting. They refresh our minds
after a hard day’s work. We need to do something different
in order to do our routine work effectively. Hobbies provide
this variety.
Hobbies relieve us from the monotony of daily life. They fill
us with enthusiasm for work and keep our energy levels high.
We will go to any extent to get the things that we require, to get
the utmost joy from our hobbies.
Hobbies are also useful activities. Quite a few hobbies, like
stamp-collecting, widen our general knowledge about various
countries of the world. When we share common interests we
even get into correspondence with people of other countries.
Chap 10.indd 85 12/5/2024 10:18:11 AM
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86 Hornbill This is how we write an essay.
A composition on a particular subject consisting of more than one
paragraph is an essay. The characteristics of a good essay are:
Unity : The essay should deal with the main subject, and all
parts of it should be clearly linked with that subject.
Coherence : There should be a logical sequence of thought. This
requires a logical relationship between ideas, sentences
and paragraphs.
Relevance : Unimportant information should not be included.
Proportion : Giving more space to the important ideas.
Read the following essay and the passage analysis that follows it
carefully.
The Importance of Games
1. “The Battle of Waterloo was won on the playing fields of Eton.” These
words have been attributed to the Duke of Wellington. Certainly
one does not play games in order to win battles; neither does the
curriculum include them for that reason. But the importance of
games in life should not be underestimated, for without them it is
harder for a person to be sound in body and mind.
2. For one thing, if a person is to fulfil all the duties that society
expects of him, it is important for him to keep healthy. He may be
very intelligent, but that has little meaning if he cannot make use
of his intelligence, because he is always suffering from bad health.
In some ways, the human body is like a machine. If it is not made
use of, it starts to work badly. People who are not fit grow weak and
become more susceptible to disease. Any form of game is useful,
provided it gives the body an opportunity to take regular physical
exercise.
3. Secondly, playing — and therefore experiencing winning
and losing — encourages the spirit of sportsmanship, thus
enabling one to deal with life’s problems in a wise and natural
manner. Games teach the truth embodied in the Olympic
motto: ‘The important thing in playing is not the winning or the
losing, but the participation’ — and, I may add, doing the best
one can.
4. We have to remember some other things about playing games,
however. First, it is the physical exercise that is important for
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health, not the games themselves, and there are other ways of
getting this. Is not India the home of yoga? It is also possible to be
too interested in games. When we think of the Greek ideal expressed
in the Latin phrase, ‘mens sana in corpore sano’ (a healthy mind
in a healthy body), we should not forget that it is the mind which
is mentioned first. And if we let games become the most important
thing in our lives, we may be in danger of changing the Olympic
motto to ‘the important thing is winning’.
5. Nevertheless, in spite of these dangers, playing games can be a
valuable activity, and if we take part in them wisely, we can gain
great benefits.
Passage Analysis
?? The writer uses five paragraphs
?? Each paragraph deals sequentially with a topic.
– Paragraph 1 introduces the subject, and makes a general
statement about the importance of games.
– Paragraph 2 explains the benefits of playing games.
– Paragraph 3 deals with the moral benefits.
– Paragraph 4 deals with the disadvantages and dangers.
– Paragraph 5 sums up the writer’s opinion, taking into account all
he has said in paragraphs 2, 3 and 4, i.e. it forms the conclusion.
The structure (or plan) of the essay is summed up in the following
flow diagram.
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4. Essay-writing
Most of us find it difficult to begin writing. We can make this easier
by thinking about the topic either through brainstorming, that is
with several people in a group giving their ideas as they strike them,
or by putting them down on a sheet of paper as they occur to us.
For example, if the topic is ‘Hobbies’, we can draw a circle and write
‘hobbies’ in it:
Hollies
Then we can put down our thoughts as they come to us in a random
manner as shown below.
Having done that we select the points and expand each into a sentence.
1. Hobbies are free-time activities. Examples are stamp-collecting,
painting etc.
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2. They are matters of personal choice, not forced.
3. They are interesting and give pleasure.
4. They refresh the mind by providing an opportunity to do different
kinds of activities.
5. They provide relief from monotony.
6. They help us channelise our energy.
7. They can also be useful activities and can provide pleasure to
others. For example, reading out to visually impaired people,
visiting art exhibitions, music concerts etc.
8. Hobbies are educative and they widen our general knowledge.
9. They help us develop our overall personality.
10. They serve as a medium for the expression of our creativity.
11. We meet interesting people through our common interests and
develop friendships.
We usually begin a topic with a definition or short description. We could
begin thus:
Hobbies are activities that we engage in, in our free time. We
may be interested in needlework, drawing and painting or music.
Other common hobbies are stamp-collecting, clay-modelling,
solving crossword puzzles.
Although hobbies also entail work they are taken upon
through one’s own personal choice. They are not forced upon
us. They are activities that we are really interested in and hence
give us a great deal of pleasure.
Hobbies make life interesting. They refresh our minds
after a hard day’s work. We need to do something different
in order to do our routine work effectively. Hobbies provide
this variety.
Hobbies relieve us from the monotony of daily life. They fill
us with enthusiasm for work and keep our energy levels high.
We will go to any extent to get the things that we require, to get
the utmost joy from our hobbies.
Hobbies are also useful activities. Quite a few hobbies, like
stamp-collecting, widen our general knowledge about various
countries of the world. When we share common interests we
even get into correspondence with people of other countries.
Chap 10.indd 85 12/5/2024 10:18:11 AM
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86 Hornbill This is how we write an essay.
A composition on a particular subject consisting of more than one
paragraph is an essay. The characteristics of a good essay are:
Unity : The essay should deal with the main subject, and all
parts of it should be clearly linked with that subject.
Coherence : There should be a logical sequence of thought. This
requires a logical relationship between ideas, sentences
and paragraphs.
Relevance : Unimportant information should not be included.
Proportion : Giving more space to the important ideas.
Read the following essay and the passage analysis that follows it
carefully.
The Importance of Games
1. “The Battle of Waterloo was won on the playing fields of Eton.” These
words have been attributed to the Duke of Wellington. Certainly
one does not play games in order to win battles; neither does the
curriculum include them for that reason. But the importance of
games in life should not be underestimated, for without them it is
harder for a person to be sound in body and mind.
2. For one thing, if a person is to fulfil all the duties that society
expects of him, it is important for him to keep healthy. He may be
very intelligent, but that has little meaning if he cannot make use
of his intelligence, because he is always suffering from bad health.
In some ways, the human body is like a machine. If it is not made
use of, it starts to work badly. People who are not fit grow weak and
become more susceptible to disease. Any form of game is useful,
provided it gives the body an opportunity to take regular physical
exercise.
3. Secondly, playing — and therefore experiencing winning
and losing — encourages the spirit of sportsmanship, thus
enabling one to deal with life’s problems in a wise and natural
manner. Games teach the truth embodied in the Olympic
motto: ‘The important thing in playing is not the winning or the
losing, but the participation’ — and, I may add, doing the best
one can.
4. We have to remember some other things about playing games,
however. First, it is the physical exercise that is important for
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health, not the games themselves, and there are other ways of
getting this. Is not India the home of yoga? It is also possible to be
too interested in games. When we think of the Greek ideal expressed
in the Latin phrase, ‘mens sana in corpore sano’ (a healthy mind
in a healthy body), we should not forget that it is the mind which
is mentioned first. And if we let games become the most important
thing in our lives, we may be in danger of changing the Olympic
motto to ‘the important thing is winning’.
5. Nevertheless, in spite of these dangers, playing games can be a
valuable activity, and if we take part in them wisely, we can gain
great benefits.
Passage Analysis
?? The writer uses five paragraphs
?? Each paragraph deals sequentially with a topic.
– Paragraph 1 introduces the subject, and makes a general
statement about the importance of games.
– Paragraph 2 explains the benefits of playing games.
– Paragraph 3 deals with the moral benefits.
– Paragraph 4 deals with the disadvantages and dangers.
– Paragraph 5 sums up the writer’s opinion, taking into account all
he has said in paragraphs 2, 3 and 4, i.e. it forms the conclusion.
The structure (or plan) of the essay is summed up in the following
flow diagram.
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88 Hornbill Activity
Here are a few topics for essay writing. Follow the steps listed above
to write on these topics.
1. Himalayan quake 2005.
2. Those who can bear all can dare all.
3. Fascinating facts about water.
4. Public health in transition.
5. Human population grows up.
6. Success begins in the mind.
7. Think before you shop.
The trend of decline in the Child Sex Ratio (CSR) defined as
the number of girls per 1000 boys between 0–6 years of age, has
remained unabated till today. To ensure survival, protection and
empowerment of the girl child, the government has announced Beti
Bachao, Beti Padhao scheme. This is being implemented through a
national campaign. The objectives of this scheme are:
• Prevention of gender-biased sex selection elimination.
• Ensuring survival and protection of the girl child.
• Ensuring education and participation of the girl child.
Organise as essay writing activity in your class, the themes
should be based on the objectives stated above. Mention how you
can contribute to this programme, in the essay.
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