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1 of 14
MARKING SCHEME (2023-24)
ENGLISH LANGUAGE AND LITERATURE (Code No. 184)
CLASS-X
SECTION A : READING (20 marks)
1. Discursive passage 1x10=10m
i C. Recognizes the challenges of studying poetry but also acknowledges the
rewards it offers.
[Throughout the initial paragraph, the author acknowledges the difficulties
of studying poetry, but also notes the emotional resonance and sense of
accomplishment that can be derived from analysing complex works.
Therefore, option C is the correct answer.]
1
No partial credit
ii The tone - critical
Rationale - The writer seems to be expressing their scepticism and
dissatisfaction with poems that are overly obscure and difficult to
understand. The writer suggests that such poems may not be worth the effort
and compares them unfavourably to solving a riddle. [Overall, the tone
suggests a frustration with poetry that prioritizes obscurity over clarity and
meaning.]
OR
The tone - sarcastic
The statement "if solving a riddle is what was intended, then playing Sudoku
is a better option" suggests that the writer is not impressed with the level of
complexity in some poetry. Additionally, the phrase "led to ponder if
obscurity was the goal" implies that the writer believes some poets may
intentionally make their work difficult to understand, which can be
frustrating for readers.[ The sarcastic tone in these lines is likely a reflection
of the writer's opinion that poetry should not be needlessly complex and
should strive to connect with readers.]
2
-1 for
identification &
1 for rationale
-Partial credit of
1 for correct
mention of
either
-No ½ credit
iii ... it creates a powerful emotional impact and enhances the reader's
understanding of the intensity of emotion that can be conveyed through
poetry.
1
-1 for complete
explanation
-Partial credit ½
for indication of
reason without
explanation
iv (a) intriguing and off-putting
(d) simple and challenging
[They represent opposite concepts, with "simple" meaning easy,
uncomplicated, or straightforward, while "challenging" means difficult,
demanding, or requiring effort. In the given passage, the author uses both
terms to describe different types of poetry that a reader may encounter.]
1
-1 for both
correct
identification
-Partial credit ½
for any one
correct
identification
v ...the author acknowledges that weird poems can be off-putting, but also
appreciates their uniqueness and the challenge they present to readers
[hence, the author is being neutral and objective with no bias]
1
-1 for
addressing both
neutral and
objective
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1 of 14
MARKING SCHEME (2023-24)
ENGLISH LANGUAGE AND LITERATURE (Code No. 184)
CLASS-X
SECTION A : READING (20 marks)
1. Discursive passage 1x10=10m
i C. Recognizes the challenges of studying poetry but also acknowledges the
rewards it offers.
[Throughout the initial paragraph, the author acknowledges the difficulties
of studying poetry, but also notes the emotional resonance and sense of
accomplishment that can be derived from analysing complex works.
Therefore, option C is the correct answer.]
1
No partial credit
ii The tone - critical
Rationale - The writer seems to be expressing their scepticism and
dissatisfaction with poems that are overly obscure and difficult to
understand. The writer suggests that such poems may not be worth the effort
and compares them unfavourably to solving a riddle. [Overall, the tone
suggests a frustration with poetry that prioritizes obscurity over clarity and
meaning.]
OR
The tone - sarcastic
The statement "if solving a riddle is what was intended, then playing Sudoku
is a better option" suggests that the writer is not impressed with the level of
complexity in some poetry. Additionally, the phrase "led to ponder if
obscurity was the goal" implies that the writer believes some poets may
intentionally make their work difficult to understand, which can be
frustrating for readers.[ The sarcastic tone in these lines is likely a reflection
of the writer's opinion that poetry should not be needlessly complex and
should strive to connect with readers.]
2
-1 for
identification &
1 for rationale
-Partial credit of
1 for correct
mention of
either
-No ½ credit
iii ... it creates a powerful emotional impact and enhances the reader's
understanding of the intensity of emotion that can be conveyed through
poetry.
1
-1 for complete
explanation
-Partial credit ½
for indication of
reason without
explanation
iv (a) intriguing and off-putting
(d) simple and challenging
[They represent opposite concepts, with "simple" meaning easy,
uncomplicated, or straightforward, while "challenging" means difficult,
demanding, or requiring effort. In the given passage, the author uses both
terms to describe different types of poetry that a reader may encounter.]
1
-1 for both
correct
identification
-Partial credit ½
for any one
correct
identification
v ...the author acknowledges that weird poems can be off-putting, but also
appreciates their uniqueness and the challenge they present to readers
[hence, the author is being neutral and objective with no bias]
1
-1 for
addressing both
neutral and
objective
2 of 14
-Partial credit ½
for addressing
either of two
vi Just as exploring a new city requires an open mind and a willingness to
embrace the unexpected, studying poetry requires an openness to different
styles and approaches, and a willingness to be challenged and surprised by
what you find.
2
-2 for a
completely
appropriate
explanation for
both city and
poetry
-Partial credit 1
for just an
appropriate
mention of
either
-No ½ credit
vii B. Persistence makes studying poetry a rewarding pursuit.
[Q. is rooted in paragraph (4). Hina's experience of finally unlocking a poem's meaning and
feeling a sense of accomplishment shows that poetry can be rewarding if one is persistent.]
1
No partial credit
viii Simple
[This verse is simple in terms of its language, structure, and content. It describes a natural
scene, which is easy to comprehend and has a peaceful effect on the reader.]
1
No partial credit
2. Case-based factual passage 10 m
i ... a fish needs decorations such as plants or rocks, to simulate a natural
environment and improve its quality of life, people living in urban areas need
green spaces such as vertical gardens to improve their physical and mental
wellbeing.
[ The analogy highlights the importance of providing a natural and healthy environment for
living beings, regardless of their habitat, and emphasizes the need to explore creative
solutions to meet this need.]
1
-No partial
credit
- Full credit to
be given for
rationalised
response other
than that
indicated
ii opinion; subjective judgement
[This statement expresses a viewpoint or belief about the benefits of incorporating nature
and structures through vertical gardens and green walls in urban spaces. While there may
be evidence to support this opinion, such as research on the positive effects of greenery on
well-being or the visual appeal of vertical gardens, it is still ultimately a subjective judgment
rather than an objective fact that can be proven or disproven.]
1
-No partial
credit
-Both need to
answered
correctly as
they are
rationally linked
iii True, because the majority of participants strongly agreed or agreed that
vertical gardens can improve the quality of life, increase air quality, and have
a relaxing and calming effect. However, the survey does not provide
information on the long-term effectiveness of vertical gardens or their
potential impact on other aspects of urban life, such as traffic or community
engagement.
2
Full credit 2,
when complete
justification is
presented
Partial credit 1 ,
when just a
point is stated
without
evidence from
table 1.
No credit of ½
iv A city government looking to install vertical gardens should consider
addressing these concerns:
? cost of installation and maintenance [should be reasonable]
1
No partial credit
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1 of 14
MARKING SCHEME (2023-24)
ENGLISH LANGUAGE AND LITERATURE (Code No. 184)
CLASS-X
SECTION A : READING (20 marks)
1. Discursive passage 1x10=10m
i C. Recognizes the challenges of studying poetry but also acknowledges the
rewards it offers.
[Throughout the initial paragraph, the author acknowledges the difficulties
of studying poetry, but also notes the emotional resonance and sense of
accomplishment that can be derived from analysing complex works.
Therefore, option C is the correct answer.]
1
No partial credit
ii The tone - critical
Rationale - The writer seems to be expressing their scepticism and
dissatisfaction with poems that are overly obscure and difficult to
understand. The writer suggests that such poems may not be worth the effort
and compares them unfavourably to solving a riddle. [Overall, the tone
suggests a frustration with poetry that prioritizes obscurity over clarity and
meaning.]
OR
The tone - sarcastic
The statement "if solving a riddle is what was intended, then playing Sudoku
is a better option" suggests that the writer is not impressed with the level of
complexity in some poetry. Additionally, the phrase "led to ponder if
obscurity was the goal" implies that the writer believes some poets may
intentionally make their work difficult to understand, which can be
frustrating for readers.[ The sarcastic tone in these lines is likely a reflection
of the writer's opinion that poetry should not be needlessly complex and
should strive to connect with readers.]
2
-1 for
identification &
1 for rationale
-Partial credit of
1 for correct
mention of
either
-No ½ credit
iii ... it creates a powerful emotional impact and enhances the reader's
understanding of the intensity of emotion that can be conveyed through
poetry.
1
-1 for complete
explanation
-Partial credit ½
for indication of
reason without
explanation
iv (a) intriguing and off-putting
(d) simple and challenging
[They represent opposite concepts, with "simple" meaning easy,
uncomplicated, or straightforward, while "challenging" means difficult,
demanding, or requiring effort. In the given passage, the author uses both
terms to describe different types of poetry that a reader may encounter.]
1
-1 for both
correct
identification
-Partial credit ½
for any one
correct
identification
v ...the author acknowledges that weird poems can be off-putting, but also
appreciates their uniqueness and the challenge they present to readers
[hence, the author is being neutral and objective with no bias]
1
-1 for
addressing both
neutral and
objective
2 of 14
-Partial credit ½
for addressing
either of two
vi Just as exploring a new city requires an open mind and a willingness to
embrace the unexpected, studying poetry requires an openness to different
styles and approaches, and a willingness to be challenged and surprised by
what you find.
2
-2 for a
completely
appropriate
explanation for
both city and
poetry
-Partial credit 1
for just an
appropriate
mention of
either
-No ½ credit
vii B. Persistence makes studying poetry a rewarding pursuit.
[Q. is rooted in paragraph (4). Hina's experience of finally unlocking a poem's meaning and
feeling a sense of accomplishment shows that poetry can be rewarding if one is persistent.]
1
No partial credit
viii Simple
[This verse is simple in terms of its language, structure, and content. It describes a natural
scene, which is easy to comprehend and has a peaceful effect on the reader.]
1
No partial credit
2. Case-based factual passage 10 m
i ... a fish needs decorations such as plants or rocks, to simulate a natural
environment and improve its quality of life, people living in urban areas need
green spaces such as vertical gardens to improve their physical and mental
wellbeing.
[ The analogy highlights the importance of providing a natural and healthy environment for
living beings, regardless of their habitat, and emphasizes the need to explore creative
solutions to meet this need.]
1
-No partial
credit
- Full credit to
be given for
rationalised
response other
than that
indicated
ii opinion; subjective judgement
[This statement expresses a viewpoint or belief about the benefits of incorporating nature
and structures through vertical gardens and green walls in urban spaces. While there may
be evidence to support this opinion, such as research on the positive effects of greenery on
well-being or the visual appeal of vertical gardens, it is still ultimately a subjective judgment
rather than an objective fact that can be proven or disproven.]
1
-No partial
credit
-Both need to
answered
correctly as
they are
rationally linked
iii True, because the majority of participants strongly agreed or agreed that
vertical gardens can improve the quality of life, increase air quality, and have
a relaxing and calming effect. However, the survey does not provide
information on the long-term effectiveness of vertical gardens or their
potential impact on other aspects of urban life, such as traffic or community
engagement.
2
Full credit 2,
when complete
justification is
presented
Partial credit 1 ,
when just a
point is stated
without
evidence from
table 1.
No credit of ½
iv A city government looking to install vertical gardens should consider
addressing these concerns:
? cost of installation and maintenance [should be reasonable]
1
No partial credit
3 of 14
? areas of installation should be where driver distraction is less of an
issue.
[Both need to be mentioned as the survey reflects these]
v Possible inferences: (any one)
? Participants may not be fully informed or aware of the effects of vertical
gardens on air quality, which could contribute to the neutral response.
[This suggests a need for more education and awareness campaigns around the
benefits of vertical gardens.]
? The perceived effect of vertical gardens on air quality may vary based on
the specific location or environment in which they are installed. [This could
explain the higher number of neutral responses, as participants may not have enough
information to judge the statement in a generalized manner.]
? It is possible that participants did not have a strong opinion or preference
regarding the effect of vertical gardens on air quality, which resulted in
a neutral response. [This could indicate a need for more targeted research to
understand the potential benefits and limitations of vertical gardens in improving air
quality.]
1
No partial credit
vi B. Only (ii)
[Cambridge dictionary - to twist or be twisted together, or to be connected so as to be
difficult to separate] , Hence , Option B.
FOR THE VISUALLY IMPAIRED CANDIDATES
D. standard
[Most likely option - standard, as it refers to something commonplace,
hence opposite of unique]
1
No partial credit
vii Advantages of vertical gardens over other green spaces-
? They can be installed in small spaces, making them ideal for urban areas
with limited space.
? They also offer aesthetic and design benefits, as they can be customized
to fit specific architectural styles or preferences.
Disadvantages of vertical gardens over other green spaces-
? May not provide as much space for outdoor recreation as community
gardens or parks do.
? The cost of installation and maintenance may be higher than for other
types of green spaces.
2
-2 for correctly
addressing both
-Partial credit 1
for correctly
addressing
either of two
- No ½ credit
viii B. Vertical gardening is a sustainable practice that can transform urban
spaces into green areas.
[The passage clearly states that the study acknowledged the potential of vertical gardening
to transform urban spaces into green, sustainable areas. This suggests that vertical gardening
is seen as a sustainable practice that can have a positive impact on the environment and
human well-being. The other answer choices are incorrect as they either contradict the
information given in the passage (A and C) or are not relevant to the
passage (D).]
1
3. SECTION B : GRAMMAR (10 marks)
Full credit 1, for correct answers. No partial credit of ½ , for any question in this section
i
highlights
ii
must - will
iii
Abhilash asked Neha whether / if her best friend was helping her in that venture.
iv
C. why he had chosen to participate
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MARKING SCHEME (2023-24)
ENGLISH LANGUAGE AND LITERATURE (Code No. 184)
CLASS-X
SECTION A : READING (20 marks)
1. Discursive passage 1x10=10m
i C. Recognizes the challenges of studying poetry but also acknowledges the
rewards it offers.
[Throughout the initial paragraph, the author acknowledges the difficulties
of studying poetry, but also notes the emotional resonance and sense of
accomplishment that can be derived from analysing complex works.
Therefore, option C is the correct answer.]
1
No partial credit
ii The tone - critical
Rationale - The writer seems to be expressing their scepticism and
dissatisfaction with poems that are overly obscure and difficult to
understand. The writer suggests that such poems may not be worth the effort
and compares them unfavourably to solving a riddle. [Overall, the tone
suggests a frustration with poetry that prioritizes obscurity over clarity and
meaning.]
OR
The tone - sarcastic
The statement "if solving a riddle is what was intended, then playing Sudoku
is a better option" suggests that the writer is not impressed with the level of
complexity in some poetry. Additionally, the phrase "led to ponder if
obscurity was the goal" implies that the writer believes some poets may
intentionally make their work difficult to understand, which can be
frustrating for readers.[ The sarcastic tone in these lines is likely a reflection
of the writer's opinion that poetry should not be needlessly complex and
should strive to connect with readers.]
2
-1 for
identification &
1 for rationale
-Partial credit of
1 for correct
mention of
either
-No ½ credit
iii ... it creates a powerful emotional impact and enhances the reader's
understanding of the intensity of emotion that can be conveyed through
poetry.
1
-1 for complete
explanation
-Partial credit ½
for indication of
reason without
explanation
iv (a) intriguing and off-putting
(d) simple and challenging
[They represent opposite concepts, with "simple" meaning easy,
uncomplicated, or straightforward, while "challenging" means difficult,
demanding, or requiring effort. In the given passage, the author uses both
terms to describe different types of poetry that a reader may encounter.]
1
-1 for both
correct
identification
-Partial credit ½
for any one
correct
identification
v ...the author acknowledges that weird poems can be off-putting, but also
appreciates their uniqueness and the challenge they present to readers
[hence, the author is being neutral and objective with no bias]
1
-1 for
addressing both
neutral and
objective
2 of 14
-Partial credit ½
for addressing
either of two
vi Just as exploring a new city requires an open mind and a willingness to
embrace the unexpected, studying poetry requires an openness to different
styles and approaches, and a willingness to be challenged and surprised by
what you find.
2
-2 for a
completely
appropriate
explanation for
both city and
poetry
-Partial credit 1
for just an
appropriate
mention of
either
-No ½ credit
vii B. Persistence makes studying poetry a rewarding pursuit.
[Q. is rooted in paragraph (4). Hina's experience of finally unlocking a poem's meaning and
feeling a sense of accomplishment shows that poetry can be rewarding if one is persistent.]
1
No partial credit
viii Simple
[This verse is simple in terms of its language, structure, and content. It describes a natural
scene, which is easy to comprehend and has a peaceful effect on the reader.]
1
No partial credit
2. Case-based factual passage 10 m
i ... a fish needs decorations such as plants or rocks, to simulate a natural
environment and improve its quality of life, people living in urban areas need
green spaces such as vertical gardens to improve their physical and mental
wellbeing.
[ The analogy highlights the importance of providing a natural and healthy environment for
living beings, regardless of their habitat, and emphasizes the need to explore creative
solutions to meet this need.]
1
-No partial
credit
- Full credit to
be given for
rationalised
response other
than that
indicated
ii opinion; subjective judgement
[This statement expresses a viewpoint or belief about the benefits of incorporating nature
and structures through vertical gardens and green walls in urban spaces. While there may
be evidence to support this opinion, such as research on the positive effects of greenery on
well-being or the visual appeal of vertical gardens, it is still ultimately a subjective judgment
rather than an objective fact that can be proven or disproven.]
1
-No partial
credit
-Both need to
answered
correctly as
they are
rationally linked
iii True, because the majority of participants strongly agreed or agreed that
vertical gardens can improve the quality of life, increase air quality, and have
a relaxing and calming effect. However, the survey does not provide
information on the long-term effectiveness of vertical gardens or their
potential impact on other aspects of urban life, such as traffic or community
engagement.
2
Full credit 2,
when complete
justification is
presented
Partial credit 1 ,
when just a
point is stated
without
evidence from
table 1.
No credit of ½
iv A city government looking to install vertical gardens should consider
addressing these concerns:
? cost of installation and maintenance [should be reasonable]
1
No partial credit
3 of 14
? areas of installation should be where driver distraction is less of an
issue.
[Both need to be mentioned as the survey reflects these]
v Possible inferences: (any one)
? Participants may not be fully informed or aware of the effects of vertical
gardens on air quality, which could contribute to the neutral response.
[This suggests a need for more education and awareness campaigns around the
benefits of vertical gardens.]
? The perceived effect of vertical gardens on air quality may vary based on
the specific location or environment in which they are installed. [This could
explain the higher number of neutral responses, as participants may not have enough
information to judge the statement in a generalized manner.]
? It is possible that participants did not have a strong opinion or preference
regarding the effect of vertical gardens on air quality, which resulted in
a neutral response. [This could indicate a need for more targeted research to
understand the potential benefits and limitations of vertical gardens in improving air
quality.]
1
No partial credit
vi B. Only (ii)
[Cambridge dictionary - to twist or be twisted together, or to be connected so as to be
difficult to separate] , Hence , Option B.
FOR THE VISUALLY IMPAIRED CANDIDATES
D. standard
[Most likely option - standard, as it refers to something commonplace,
hence opposite of unique]
1
No partial credit
vii Advantages of vertical gardens over other green spaces-
? They can be installed in small spaces, making them ideal for urban areas
with limited space.
? They also offer aesthetic and design benefits, as they can be customized
to fit specific architectural styles or preferences.
Disadvantages of vertical gardens over other green spaces-
? May not provide as much space for outdoor recreation as community
gardens or parks do.
? The cost of installation and maintenance may be higher than for other
types of green spaces.
2
-2 for correctly
addressing both
-Partial credit 1
for correctly
addressing
either of two
- No ½ credit
viii B. Vertical gardening is a sustainable practice that can transform urban
spaces into green areas.
[The passage clearly states that the study acknowledged the potential of vertical gardening
to transform urban spaces into green, sustainable areas. This suggests that vertical gardening
is seen as a sustainable practice that can have a positive impact on the environment and
human well-being. The other answer choices are incorrect as they either contradict the
information given in the passage (A and C) or are not relevant to the
passage (D).]
1
3. SECTION B : GRAMMAR (10 marks)
Full credit 1, for correct answers. No partial credit of ½ , for any question in this section
i
highlights
ii
must - will
iii
Abhilash asked Neha whether / if her best friend was helping her in that venture.
iv
C. why he had chosen to participate
4 of 14
v
this
vi
aimed-aims [it’s a current projection document]
vii
C. among-between
viii
A. feeling
ix
unlike the previous month, he had been away for quite some time that month.
x
D. has won
xi
B. call
xii
will-should
SECTION B : WRITING SKILLS (10 marks)
Note : All details presented in the questions are imaginary and created for assessment purpose .
[Content , in suggested responses, may be above the recommended word limit, as it aims to share content points that
can be of use.]
4A. Suggested response :
124, Indrayani Apartments
Vaishali Street, Daipur
21 August 2023
The MLA
Janta House
Rajajipura, Daipur
Subject: Suggestion Regarding the Need to Form Ecology Clubs
Madam
This letter is written to express my concern about the environmental
degradation in our city and suggest a solution that I believe could help in
preserving and conserving nature. I believe that forming Ecology clubs and
appointing Eco-minders in our city can aid in this endeavour.
Ecology clubs can be run by resident volunteers who may undertake activities
such as making bird-houses, planting native trees, water harvesting and
creating compost piles to nurture and protect the local ecosystem. By
involving the residents in these activities, we can raise awareness about the
importance of preserving nature and instil a sense of responsibility towards
it.
Some of the implications of forming Ecology clubs are reduction of pollution
levels, increase in biodiversity and promotion of sustainable practices. This
initiative will enhance the quality of life of the residents by providing them
with a green and healthy environment.
Madam, you are requested to kindly consider this suggestion to ensure
better preservation and conservation of nature.
Yours sincerely
Vaishali Nathani
Total - 5
Format – 1
[full credit if all
aspects
included. Partial
credit (½ mark)
if one-two
aspects are
missing. No
credit if more
than two
aspects are
missing]
Content -2
[ ½ mark for
each content
point area
addressed -
suggestion,
importance,
implication,
recommendatio
n]
Organisation
of ideas -1
[effective style,
orderly
sequence,
paragraphed
structure and
formal tone and
vocabulary]
Accuracy 1
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1 of 14
MARKING SCHEME (2023-24)
ENGLISH LANGUAGE AND LITERATURE (Code No. 184)
CLASS-X
SECTION A : READING (20 marks)
1. Discursive passage 1x10=10m
i C. Recognizes the challenges of studying poetry but also acknowledges the
rewards it offers.
[Throughout the initial paragraph, the author acknowledges the difficulties
of studying poetry, but also notes the emotional resonance and sense of
accomplishment that can be derived from analysing complex works.
Therefore, option C is the correct answer.]
1
No partial credit
ii The tone - critical
Rationale - The writer seems to be expressing their scepticism and
dissatisfaction with poems that are overly obscure and difficult to
understand. The writer suggests that such poems may not be worth the effort
and compares them unfavourably to solving a riddle. [Overall, the tone
suggests a frustration with poetry that prioritizes obscurity over clarity and
meaning.]
OR
The tone - sarcastic
The statement "if solving a riddle is what was intended, then playing Sudoku
is a better option" suggests that the writer is not impressed with the level of
complexity in some poetry. Additionally, the phrase "led to ponder if
obscurity was the goal" implies that the writer believes some poets may
intentionally make their work difficult to understand, which can be
frustrating for readers.[ The sarcastic tone in these lines is likely a reflection
of the writer's opinion that poetry should not be needlessly complex and
should strive to connect with readers.]
2
-1 for
identification &
1 for rationale
-Partial credit of
1 for correct
mention of
either
-No ½ credit
iii ... it creates a powerful emotional impact and enhances the reader's
understanding of the intensity of emotion that can be conveyed through
poetry.
1
-1 for complete
explanation
-Partial credit ½
for indication of
reason without
explanation
iv (a) intriguing and off-putting
(d) simple and challenging
[They represent opposite concepts, with "simple" meaning easy,
uncomplicated, or straightforward, while "challenging" means difficult,
demanding, or requiring effort. In the given passage, the author uses both
terms to describe different types of poetry that a reader may encounter.]
1
-1 for both
correct
identification
-Partial credit ½
for any one
correct
identification
v ...the author acknowledges that weird poems can be off-putting, but also
appreciates their uniqueness and the challenge they present to readers
[hence, the author is being neutral and objective with no bias]
1
-1 for
addressing both
neutral and
objective
2 of 14
-Partial credit ½
for addressing
either of two
vi Just as exploring a new city requires an open mind and a willingness to
embrace the unexpected, studying poetry requires an openness to different
styles and approaches, and a willingness to be challenged and surprised by
what you find.
2
-2 for a
completely
appropriate
explanation for
both city and
poetry
-Partial credit 1
for just an
appropriate
mention of
either
-No ½ credit
vii B. Persistence makes studying poetry a rewarding pursuit.
[Q. is rooted in paragraph (4). Hina's experience of finally unlocking a poem's meaning and
feeling a sense of accomplishment shows that poetry can be rewarding if one is persistent.]
1
No partial credit
viii Simple
[This verse is simple in terms of its language, structure, and content. It describes a natural
scene, which is easy to comprehend and has a peaceful effect on the reader.]
1
No partial credit
2. Case-based factual passage 10 m
i ... a fish needs decorations such as plants or rocks, to simulate a natural
environment and improve its quality of life, people living in urban areas need
green spaces such as vertical gardens to improve their physical and mental
wellbeing.
[ The analogy highlights the importance of providing a natural and healthy environment for
living beings, regardless of their habitat, and emphasizes the need to explore creative
solutions to meet this need.]
1
-No partial
credit
- Full credit to
be given for
rationalised
response other
than that
indicated
ii opinion; subjective judgement
[This statement expresses a viewpoint or belief about the benefits of incorporating nature
and structures through vertical gardens and green walls in urban spaces. While there may
be evidence to support this opinion, such as research on the positive effects of greenery on
well-being or the visual appeal of vertical gardens, it is still ultimately a subjective judgment
rather than an objective fact that can be proven or disproven.]
1
-No partial
credit
-Both need to
answered
correctly as
they are
rationally linked
iii True, because the majority of participants strongly agreed or agreed that
vertical gardens can improve the quality of life, increase air quality, and have
a relaxing and calming effect. However, the survey does not provide
information on the long-term effectiveness of vertical gardens or their
potential impact on other aspects of urban life, such as traffic or community
engagement.
2
Full credit 2,
when complete
justification is
presented
Partial credit 1 ,
when just a
point is stated
without
evidence from
table 1.
No credit of ½
iv A city government looking to install vertical gardens should consider
addressing these concerns:
? cost of installation and maintenance [should be reasonable]
1
No partial credit
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? areas of installation should be where driver distraction is less of an
issue.
[Both need to be mentioned as the survey reflects these]
v Possible inferences: (any one)
? Participants may not be fully informed or aware of the effects of vertical
gardens on air quality, which could contribute to the neutral response.
[This suggests a need for more education and awareness campaigns around the
benefits of vertical gardens.]
? The perceived effect of vertical gardens on air quality may vary based on
the specific location or environment in which they are installed. [This could
explain the higher number of neutral responses, as participants may not have enough
information to judge the statement in a generalized manner.]
? It is possible that participants did not have a strong opinion or preference
regarding the effect of vertical gardens on air quality, which resulted in
a neutral response. [This could indicate a need for more targeted research to
understand the potential benefits and limitations of vertical gardens in improving air
quality.]
1
No partial credit
vi B. Only (ii)
[Cambridge dictionary - to twist or be twisted together, or to be connected so as to be
difficult to separate] , Hence , Option B.
FOR THE VISUALLY IMPAIRED CANDIDATES
D. standard
[Most likely option - standard, as it refers to something commonplace,
hence opposite of unique]
1
No partial credit
vii Advantages of vertical gardens over other green spaces-
? They can be installed in small spaces, making them ideal for urban areas
with limited space.
? They also offer aesthetic and design benefits, as they can be customized
to fit specific architectural styles or preferences.
Disadvantages of vertical gardens over other green spaces-
? May not provide as much space for outdoor recreation as community
gardens or parks do.
? The cost of installation and maintenance may be higher than for other
types of green spaces.
2
-2 for correctly
addressing both
-Partial credit 1
for correctly
addressing
either of two
- No ½ credit
viii B. Vertical gardening is a sustainable practice that can transform urban
spaces into green areas.
[The passage clearly states that the study acknowledged the potential of vertical gardening
to transform urban spaces into green, sustainable areas. This suggests that vertical gardening
is seen as a sustainable practice that can have a positive impact on the environment and
human well-being. The other answer choices are incorrect as they either contradict the
information given in the passage (A and C) or are not relevant to the
passage (D).]
1
3. SECTION B : GRAMMAR (10 marks)
Full credit 1, for correct answers. No partial credit of ½ , for any question in this section
i
highlights
ii
must - will
iii
Abhilash asked Neha whether / if her best friend was helping her in that venture.
iv
C. why he had chosen to participate
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v
this
vi
aimed-aims [it’s a current projection document]
vii
C. among-between
viii
A. feeling
ix
unlike the previous month, he had been away for quite some time that month.
x
D. has won
xi
B. call
xii
will-should
SECTION B : WRITING SKILLS (10 marks)
Note : All details presented in the questions are imaginary and created for assessment purpose .
[Content , in suggested responses, may be above the recommended word limit, as it aims to share content points that
can be of use.]
4A. Suggested response :
124, Indrayani Apartments
Vaishali Street, Daipur
21 August 2023
The MLA
Janta House
Rajajipura, Daipur
Subject: Suggestion Regarding the Need to Form Ecology Clubs
Madam
This letter is written to express my concern about the environmental
degradation in our city and suggest a solution that I believe could help in
preserving and conserving nature. I believe that forming Ecology clubs and
appointing Eco-minders in our city can aid in this endeavour.
Ecology clubs can be run by resident volunteers who may undertake activities
such as making bird-houses, planting native trees, water harvesting and
creating compost piles to nurture and protect the local ecosystem. By
involving the residents in these activities, we can raise awareness about the
importance of preserving nature and instil a sense of responsibility towards
it.
Some of the implications of forming Ecology clubs are reduction of pollution
levels, increase in biodiversity and promotion of sustainable practices. This
initiative will enhance the quality of life of the residents by providing them
with a green and healthy environment.
Madam, you are requested to kindly consider this suggestion to ensure
better preservation and conservation of nature.
Yours sincerely
Vaishali Nathani
Total - 5
Format – 1
[full credit if all
aspects
included. Partial
credit (½ mark)
if one-two
aspects are
missing. No
credit if more
than two
aspects are
missing]
Content -2
[ ½ mark for
each content
point area
addressed -
suggestion,
importance,
implication,
recommendatio
n]
Organisation
of ideas -1
[effective style,
orderly
sequence,
paragraphed
structure and
formal tone and
vocabulary]
Accuracy 1
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(A concerned resident)
[162 words]
[Spelling,
punctuation and
grammar]
4B. Suggested response :
Ujjwal Academy
Old City, Kilandarabad
30 August 2023
The Editor
India Samachar
Jamnagar, Kilandarabad
Subject: Introduction of Online Regional Language Learning Programmes
Dear Sir
As someone who believes that languages can help bridge regional divides and
promote unity, I am writing to suggest the introduction of an online regional
language learning programme in our city to help the recently relocated
residents (of all ages) establish a healthy rapport with the local residents and
promote mutual understanding.
This online programme, organised and run by student councils and language
clubs, can help these residents pick up the local language organically. This
initiative may be conducted only on weekends for three months, making it
feasible for participants to attend without hindering their work or studies.
Activities such as language exchange programmes, cultural events, and group
discussions on the virtual platform can be undertaken to make this
programme more engaging.
I hope that publishing of this letter in the columns of your Daily shall urge the
community to support this programme for its potential, to bring people
together, promote language proficiency, and foster a sense of brotherhood.
Yours truly
Armaan Khan
(Captain, Literary Club)
[166 words]
Format,
Organisation
& Accuracy-
same as 4A
Content -2
[ ½ mark for
each content
point area
addressed -
suggestion,
importance &
credibility,
feasibility]
5A. Suggested response :
Supporting Tesring’s candidature
As a responsible student voter, I believe Tesring possesses the necessary traits
to be an excellent School Captain. Her disciplined study routine and hard
work ethic indicate her ability to prioritize and manage her time effectively.
Tsering is less impulsive but sensitive and focuses on the excellent outcome
of tasks assigned to her demonstrating good decision-making skills.
Additionally, her willingness to help peers in academic and personal
(For 5 A & B)
Analytical
paragraph
writing
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